Wonder Of New Year

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• trekks (13629)
• [2009-01-05 19:26]
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hello Shubi

Unwrapping a gift? Interesting to see envelope and some colorful items. Although the image is soft, the light is underexposed and there seem to be distracting elements competing with the opened box, I do believe you are trying to create a mood of dreamy effect. I would think it would be better to put clarity into the main subject that you wish to portray and make it very sharp, with good lighting effect and perhaps surround it with some soft items.

Girls being girls, perhaps a flower by its side?

Very good wishes for you!

tfs, bill

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• Urfaust (13105)
• [2009-01-05 19:32]

ciao Shubhi..
it's so full of delicacy and lovely thoughts.. nice the way you have managed light and colours of your composition.. i like it all.. note incluse!
happy new year to you and to people you care! thanks
ciao Marco

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• hay_kes (56824)
• [2009-01-05 23:43]

Hi Shubhi,
Very beautiful image vith superb colours, lighting and presentation.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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• black_dream (4699)
• [2009-01-06 0:25]

Hello Shubhi!
Your heartfelt wishes compliment really well this soft, dreamy image!
May as many of your wishes accomplish this year!
Best regards,
Diana

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• Redrubin (0)
• [2009-01-06 1:04]

Hello shubi
I like the pov and the light you gave to the shot
well done in composition and effect
ciao
Lucio
HAPPY NEW YEAR

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• manujmehta (11904)
• [2009-01-06 2:04]
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Hi Shubhi
Happy New Year to you too!
where were you? you just disappeared.
this is a nice dreamy shot, interesting composition and nice light
i love gifts to be shot. this bright white light a little distraction, but yes you have achieved the dreamy effect whcih is your speciality. :)

regards
Manuj Mehta

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• ele_eng (6099)
• [2009-01-06 2:32]
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Salam Dear Shubhi
First of all, I have to declare that I am so impressed to see your profile's photo... Very attractive lady.
This is a nice representing of new year, wish you success and happiness...
Regards, ALIREZA!

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• envisage (204)
• [2009-01-06 4:14]

Hi Shubhi,

Very nice concept and framing. TFS.

Happy New Year!

Sreya

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• atomas59 (2334)
• [2009-01-06 4:24]

This is beautiful work.
Nice lighting and techniques. Stylise arrangement and crop. Well done.

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• burak28 (16280)
• [2009-01-06 5:50]

Hi Shubhi
Wonderful idea and composition
Great light and colors
Happy new year
Burak

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• giorgio2005 (1463)
• [2009-01-06 8:09]
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• KBE (2731)
• [2009-01-06 14:39]

Hi Shubhi

Welcome back :)

Good composition, nice placement of gifts and cards here. Interesting POV thats a good idea, i agree with Manuj Mehta.

Best wishes for u too, have a great 2009 :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

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• pozaru (19058)
• [2009-01-07 6:08]

What a lovely piece of work !


have a great creative 2009,
v

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• rewshearer (20919)
• [2009-01-08 7:09]
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This is an eyecatching shot Shubhi, and different in its delivery.

I'm not sure what post-treatments you used but the varying sharpness throughout the frame and the apparent changes in saturation create a warm and intimate effect, and draw the eye in to that image of the cake with its raspberry topping.

I have to say I enjoy the tenderness of this.

Rew