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Feather Of My Wings (II)


Feather Of My Wings (II)
Photo Information
Copyright: Shubhi Banerjee (shubhibanerjee) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 173 W: 37 N: 309] (1729)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-23
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-05 1:22
Viewed: 263
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"I flew crossing the heavens
I danced with swirling winds
I touched the bliss of happiness
With the feather of my wings!"

In continuation to the previous post, I played with this feather and my camera.Although I wasn't completely convinced to post this one but then thought why to fear..it's just me sharing my experiments with my friends;) So may be this won't be a visual delight to you all, but your words are welcome like always:)


Tech Talk:
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-Natural Light
-partial desaturation
-added a bit contrast
-soft focus

Enjoy your day!
Cheers,
Shubhi:)

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A very strong composition and treatment

Regards
Deepak

HI Shubhi
very impressive composition...love this...good job! tfs...
Good work
Well done
Regards
Z.

wah ji wah, aap aaye bahaar aayi, hehe hehe..
kahan thi aap? you came after such a long time par kya baat hai.. wonderful shot
nice dreamy magical effect
great light
fine green on black and white, master of magical moments.

hey, aapne phir ek photo miss kar di, aapke comment chahta tha us photo par..

regards
Manuj Mehta

Good morning Shubhi,

very impressive work. So strong (speaking of the composition and realization) and so tender at the same time. That feather looks so fragile in the human hand...so fragile like our lives and happiness.

Great work dear friend.

Best regards,

Nusa

Hello dear friend,

wonderful to see your newest creation. I have to agree with others - impressive and strong composition, great effect with the black blurry background...

That feather really seems so small and fragile...just like we are in comparison with the world. We are nothing for the world, often we are not even noticed...but for someone we are the world and that person gives us wings to fly.

Great image.

Best regards,

Stasa

Hi Shubhi,
Excellen artistic photo. The shallow DOF works perfect here. The slightly (green) sharp feather creates a fine mood. Love the lighting in this image, full of contrast showing a quite special mood. Great posting Shubhi!
Hans

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1268 W: 0 N: 2483] (20320)
  • [2009-02-05 4:06]

Hello,

quelle douceur dans cette image, un légère et délicate plume captée avec ces douces lumière, ce vert léger, grandiose.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

Bom dia Shubhi
Life will be very short always for all what we want to do.
I feel you have done the right thing...post.
Touching photo ....What I like more is the "open window" that this composition is for the imagination when i look it.
Very well worked.
Great
My regards
Teresat

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2235 W: 172 N: 0] (28820)
  • [2009-02-05 4:56]

Greetings Shubhi ;)))
Amazing soft touch...
J ;)

hio shubhi,
beautiful comp
nice mood
tfs
georgia

Hi Shubhi,
Nice presentation and composition,
great sharpness and tone.
nice effect on background,
Excellen done.
Michel

Another intimate, intricate and beautifully lit piece from you Shubhi. Nicely managed selective saturation and beautiful crisp sharpness on the filaments of the feather.
Rew

Hello Shubhi!

Clear days feel so good and free
So light as a feather can be

Clear days feel so good and free
So light as a feather can be

There's a place so easy to be found
If you want I'll take you there right now

Come with me there's music all around
Can't you hear can't you see I am free

(Lyrics by Flora Purim)

Salam Dear Shubhi

Nice dreamy shot, good use of soft focus and PP works...
The infinite dark background is excellent job, well done.
Hope you have a wonderful weekend too.

Regards, ALIREZA :)

I'm so glad you also posted this one! It is so soft and gentle and the color is beautiful, so this photo IS a pure delight for me.

Hello Shubhi,
As soft and tender are the fingers that gracefully clasp onto the vision of freedom's wings, and may your soul be as free in love...
Steve

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  • papon Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 35 W: 38 N: 70] (541)
  • [2009-02-08 1:35]

Hi Shubhi!!
Very unique composition..
lovely soft color andvery good light....
congratulate you for this shot...

Have a nice day!!
Sunandan.

hi Dear..
wonderful post..
depicts very soft thoughts n feelings..
goodone
regards
nipun

Ciao Shubhi


Another beautiful post you have here
my friend .. I always talk to
Bg in the black and defines all the details
the main theme.
Nice details and good game of light and shadows!
wonderful shot, magical effect.
Greetings!

Sergio

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  • BT123 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 1 N: 139] (955)
  • [2009-02-08 11:09]

Hi Shubi
Sounds like - Fly like a butterfly and sting like a bee!
Great b/w shot with a subtle touch of delicate green
From photographic point of view this photo has original ideas therefore exceptional unlike most shots you come across especially in Treckearth which are purely snap shots and just another record
Best Regards
Balwant

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3555 W: 736 N: 2391] (18990)
  • [2009-02-09 23:51]

superb poetry in this picture !


thanks,
v

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 31 N: 3045] (12300)
  • [2009-02-10 6:39]

HI Shubbi
Very attractive and well done.
I like the details of the feathers as well as your fingerprints, and good shadows.
Dot

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3265 W: 267 N: 7730] (32968)
  • [2009-02-11 15:29]

Hello Shubhi
You are very good with your ideas and composition.
I like your de-saturation here and especially how you have left the feather still coloured - well done - very pretty
Janice

Another nice one ... with black n white and colour composition... nice idea indeed. TFS

Hi Shubhi,

Simply fantastic concept. Focus and lighting.

TFS, Sreya

Hello Shubi,
A lovely, poetic image.May Your wings never be clipped.
Best Wishes.
MikeD

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 20 N: 685] (3311)
  • [2009-06-08 12:53]

Hi Shubhi,

Very dramatic and striking composition.
Great job...

TFS
Ramon

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