World Of My Own-1

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• Urfaust (13101)
• [2009-05-06 2:15]
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ciao Shubhi
what a beautiful and delicate portrait!.. light is sublime.. with a nice and very comunicative pose!!
excellent atmosfere.. with a lovely expression captured!
i like the entire mood this portrait is able to give!.. bravò! my compliments
ciao Marco

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• piccolina (66)
• [2009-05-06 2:38]
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Hi Shubhi,

I am really happy to see you again. It has been quite a while. How are you doing? Hope all is OK. :)

What a beautiful portrait...I have always found portraits to be fascinating, because they allow us to get to know people and their lives better. Light is incredible, because it gives this image splendid atmosphere...and a touch of innocence. Excellent moment captured...

Have a great time,

Stasa

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• szekelykristof (12587)
• [2009-05-06 2:42]
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Hello Shubhi,
Really sensual portrait of this happy, joyfully dancing girl, it demonstrates the happiness of childhood very well. I like the blurred effect on the bottom, her face is perfectly sharp with beautifully soft skin tones. I also like that you captured her innocent expression. Well done, TFS!
Best wishes,
Kristof

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• manujmehta (11900)
• [2009-05-06 2:49]
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hello shubhi
vadiya shot hai ji. love her expression and yes your dreamy effect is always there
vadiya colours too
soft light made this portrait delicate.
aur batao kya likhun? :-)

regards
Manuj MEhta

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• rewshearer (20718)
• [2009-05-06 3:08]
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Sweet portrait, nice connection between the model and camera. Good use of light. Watch for cropping the ends of limbs - her left hand is omitted from the frame at the wrist, not ideal.
I look forward to seeing the rest!
Rew

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• burak28 (16061)
• [2009-05-06 3:12]
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Hi Shubhi
Very nice to see you again
We miss you
Wonderful capture and portrait
So sweet girl
Thanks
Burak

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• willie (3099)
• [2009-05-06 4:25]
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What a sweety. You have captured her in a special mood and pose. The light is great, well done Shubhi !

regards, willie

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• teamill (5142)
• [2009-05-06 5:49]
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What a beautiful little girl and a very sweet shot of her. Love what you've done with this .. the partial desaturation, color left on her skirt, the focus on her face ... great shot. I look forward to more.
Trudy

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• hay_kes (56368)
• [2009-05-06 7:27]
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Hi Shubhi,
Very nicely portrait of this littie lady.Well taken.TFS.
Namastey,

hAyAti

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• trekks (13589)
• [2009-05-06 18:46]
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hi Shubi

No matter where you go in this world, it is a circle and in the end you come back to where you belong and what you like. A place call home. That is where we always love to return.

Perhaps TL is a temporary one for you?

Honestly I never thought of a portrait shot with motion blur! And playing around with light/shadow for it :) but I must say you did very well in this one for the little girl. In fact the way she is looking at you is a strong feature of this portrait, althought I would stil prefer to have

.body in sharpness except arms swing in blur
.no crop of hands
.a little more light at her feet
.[or crop out part of all the black below]

Still, I quite like this work and it gives me a good idea of how a motion portrait can be taken :)

Great work! Worth the time you disppear and come back with this one.

tfs, bill

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• chrisJ (41919)
• [2009-05-07 6:54]

Hi Shubhi

Good sharpness around the eyes of the girl, where it's impportant! Wonderful contrast, tonal range & framing. Tfs!

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• ramon (3255)
• [2009-05-07 9:32]

Hi Shubhi,

Very nice portrait and interesting POV.
Lighting and soft shadows is beautiful, very good eye contact, composition is excellent.

TFS...Ramon

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• ed_galagan (2319)
• [2009-05-08 6:55]

Hi Shubhi!

Very nice portrait! I like it!

Thanks,
Edward

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• Silvio2006 (42527)
• [2009-05-10 3:28]

Ciao Shubhi, lovely composition with cute model in splendid pose, superb focus, very well done, ciao Silvio