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World Of My Own-2
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Copyright: Shubhi Banerjee (shubhibanerjee) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 173 W: 37 N: 309] (1729)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-22
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/4, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-07 22:10
Viewed: 234
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Fairy dust has a tinkling sound
Try to catch it fluttering down
Before it quietly disappears
or blends with rainbow dew drop tears.

So in the flowers when you play
Remember what you've learned today
And if you hear a tiny sound
Quickly glance down to the ground.

You may just get a fleeting glimpse
of golden wings or faint footprints
For gardens whether large or small
Are not quite what they seem at all.

A Fairy poem for Diya who with her laughs and giggles and songs made our home a little fairyland.Now I just anxiously wait for her vacation to India.
This shy pose was taken when Diya was busy playing and suddenly when she relized that I was taking her pictures she got conscious.She's just 5yrs old.

Have A Great Weekend!
Cheers,
Shubhi:)

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Hello Shubhi,
You have captured Diy'as heart in this image. Pure and innocent, and as you put it perfectly, once awakened to her surroundings she has become shy and has lain caution to the wind.
Very beautiful portrait...
Steve
Have A Great Weekend Also!

Namastey Shubhi,
A wonderful portrait of this cute child.Lovely composition.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Hi Shubhi
Wonderful capture and portrait
Great note
Thanks
Burak

hello Shubhi
how are you doing?
wonderful shot
wonderful light, you have achieved a wonderful expressions of this kid.
bahut hi umda kaam hai aapka janab.

khoobsurat!

Manuj Mehta

Hi Shubbi,
Beautiful colors portrait and composition,
good naturel colors and details,
a well presented picture and good light..
Excellent done. and cute little girl...and note..
Michel

Ciao Shubhi


Very beautiful and interesting portrait.
Soft shadows and lighting is beautiful,
very good eye contact, the composition is excellent.
And your model has an angelic air that leaves
the photo and soft and delicate.
Greetings,

Have A Great Weekend 4 you 2!

Sergio

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4212 W: 414 N: 6588] (41837)
  • [2009-05-08 6:12]

Hi Shubhi

Good use of a shallow dof in this unorthdox portrait, with the tilt adding good dynamism. Tfs!

Very sweet shot Shubhi. The colors are so well suited to the mood of the shot. I also really like the shallow DOF. Great shot.
Trudy

Hi Shubhi!

Nice shot and beautiful girl! Very good lights and colours!

Regards,
Edward

Hello Shubi,

I don't ususally like portraits to be lacking sharpness but I have been shown, here, that it can work really well. The softness portrays the character and the mood. Excellent lighting to make the youngster appear to emerge from the shadows.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hi,Shubhi,
What a wonderful little girl...
She is ashamed anything!
Good focus and clarity.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hi Shubhi
great effect in this beautiful portait
a nice shot and she ll remember this moment in the future
perfect
ciao
Lucio

You can probably predict the nit-pick I will have, so I won't mention it. You already know. It's a detail to try and spot while taking a photo, though!

A nice little secretive smile. Good light.

Rew

Hi Dear Shubhi
Great sudden gesture shows how much she is ready for portrait, this means you'll have a good model in your hand.
The use of soft focus made it more artistic as your prvious posts.
TFS and regards, alireza

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2228 W: 171 N: 0] (28686)
  • [2009-05-11 2:44]

Hi Shubhi ;)
Very beautiful model...nice, happy expression, TFS
All the best,
J ;)))

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