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In search of a bite...


In search of a bite...
Photo Information
Copyright: jithil raj (jith79) (42)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-19
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-14 0:14
Viewed: 154
Points: 0
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This monkey was in search of food in the waste bin...he kept going in n out of the bin, each time bringing out something to eat...Shot in Bangalore.
Cropped, increased contrast and added border in framemaker pro.

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This had the chance to be a striking picture but there are a number of things which I think it fails on:
* you've captured a really uninteresting pose from the monkey - no facial expressions or details present
* the colours are muted and dull
* the faded border effect looks very wishy washy and just accentuates the dull colours
* the sunlight on the trees to the right is overexposed (this accounts for the washed out colours - poor exposure)
Without any exif data its impossible to give real advise on technical improvements, but I would suggest thinking more about your POV and the final presentation (and probably dropping down a couple of f/stops in bright light, at least).
Thanks...Mark

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