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Kavya Komal Shouting


Kavya Komal Shouting
Photo Information
Copyright: lavan sj (lavan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-07
Categories: Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: nikon d40, 18-55mm 3.5-5.6G ED AF-S Nikkor
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-25 2:10
Viewed: 248
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a shot in Cubbon Park, Bangalore. These girls are sisters try to act like quarreling. I felt this will be defenitly a good shot. So I immediately focused the camera towards them and adjusted the aperture to f/5.6 and shutter speed to 1/50 and clicked.

Then after that I took it to the photoshop and reduced the saturation of the trees and increased the saturation of the both girls.
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hello Lavan
how are you?
good expressions
nice timing
fine light at the back
good colours
fine composition

regards
Manuj Mehta

very nice shot
composition is awesome
light is perfect
colors are great

Deepak

Hi Lavan,
Good genre scene. Reasonable PP.
Regards,
Vadym

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4228 W: 414 N: 6653] (42081)
  • [2009-03-25 4:21]

Hi lavan

No need for these 2 girls to enrol in an expensive drama class. They seem to have the gist of it, down pat. Good use of a shallow dof, & tfs!

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2009-03-25 6:04]

Hi Lavan

Excellent candid shot as even predending is candid per se. Very nice framing and excellent colors and sharp details.

Have a good day and TFS
Argiris

Hi Lavan Jaan,
Very nice moment vith lovely composition.TFS.
Namaste,

hAyAti

Hey Lavan
Excellent people photo and very nice expresion of this two laughing girls
TFS
Cheers,Braca

Bonjour Lavan
Nice shot of two girls as playing drama
They are full of life

Hi Lavan, a funny capture taken in time. Wondetful shot.
TFS and cheers,
Bayram

Hi Lavan,
Beautiful picture nicely composed and presented in great colors and sharpness,
Best regards!
Zoltan

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  • peetol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 589 W: 66 N: 698] (5743)
  • [2009-03-26 11:04]

Hello Lavan. There seem to be some black pixelation on the right side of the picture. But aside from that, the composition is very good, but you might want to include the feet of the girls in the frame to give a more dramatic sense to the picture. I hope this helps and thanks for sharing.

Cheers,

Pierre

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