ATTRACTIVE LAUGH

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• Neuro_Toxin (283)
• [2009-06-14 5:21]

Hi
Good picture, Yogesh.Her's is an attractive laugh indeed .I think you have cropped it a lil too tight,may be to avoid the person sittin behind her. Still ,a lil more head room wud have further enhaced the beauty of the picture. Keep postin more.

TFS
Have a NiceDay :)
-Neuro_Toxin

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• manujmehta (11900)
• [2009-06-14 7:04]

yogesh though the life is eye catching but you know there are few technical problems which you should work upon, i find some movement in the shot which made it defocused if you see near the eyes and above the ear. for me the background is distracting, the teeshirt guy is distracting me a lot and i thing you could have provided a head room too. if you have the raw file with you please do the right croping so that the picture comes in to thirds.

Manuj Mehta