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Photo Information
Copyright: Aniruddha Naphad (Andy_2008) (102)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-09
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.8, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-15 21:55
Viewed: 205
Points: 3
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i tried to capture tne flames at low shutter speed but the light coming from window made it diffcult..

i have tried to get good picture out of it by post prcessing .. hope so i have achived it ..

Please let me know..

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To laituap: ThanksAndy_2008 1 12-17 08:07
To KBE: ThanksAndy_2008 2 12-15 22:54
To ravenvillareal: ThanksAndy_2008 1 12-15 22:52
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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 450 W: 103 N: 593] (2739)
  • [2008-12-15 22:16]
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Hello Aniruddha
ur subject is quite interesting but to be honest it didn't work out. Few point i'd like to share may be it'll be helpful for u.

1- Very samll in size. (u can upload upto 300kbs)
2- Too much visible noise.
3- The person sitting on left side we can only see his head, either u clone it out or try to capture atleast half.
4- Very dark from lower side.
5- POV is not at all interesting.
6- U've added some1 sitting in the left side (very little cloth appeared)
7- it looks like two wires are conected to the person sitting in white.

Hope u wont mind :)
Tfs
Cheers
JZM

you gonna be careful andy..doing this inside the room looks dangerous for me..=)

i would suggest to use small openning of the aperture something like f/8.0 and a shutter speed of not less than 60(so you wont need a tripod), and ISO of 100 or 200, and then from that setting your mettering will be underexpose and this will create a dramatic scene...the fire will also gives highlights to the figures.i hope this one helps!

cheers,
raven

nice shot andy

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