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A walk through the garden


A walk through the garden
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Copyright: Sreya Dutta (envisage) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 11 N: 27] (204)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-22
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family
Camera: Nokia N73
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-09 1:33
Viewed: 293
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Took this in a garden of an apartment complex with my mobile phone.
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hello Sreya

Quite impressive to see cellphone quality of this shot to show a well composed view of a corner of the garden showing the drain curves and lined trees on each side, making a pleasant scenery of green. Good focus and color tone of green, although the sky is a bit dull on this day. Your POV is chosen well and the composition is well-thought. Perhaps just crop out the bit of yellow flower at bottom, or show more of it? You are right to crop the top and avoid showing more of the dull sky.

Good work.

tfs, bill

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 592 W: 0 N: 957] (4596)
  • [2009-02-12 3:00]

Hi Sreya,
a nice perspective shown here. Good details of a garden with water and greens.
Nicely composed.

regards,
Foozi

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