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• tatara (3779)
• [2008-02-24 6:33]

Great,bravo

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• Black_Dog (1815)
• [2008-02-24 7:03]

Howdy Vaibhav!
Very original POV. Good composition. Original portrait. Good capture.
TFS!

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• szablak (739)
• [2008-02-24 7:34]
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Hi Vaibhav,
very nice crop. I think it could use with a bit of sarpening while you were at it in photoshop, but still it is very eye-catching. it certainly caught my eye.
regards,
szablak

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• xxxessive (42)
• [2008-03-07 18:47]
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Hey there Vaibhav,

This is a really nice portrait with a great eye for composition. There is a god use of shadows, and presents a very intriguing feel.

However, I think that the frame is a little thick, and seems to be masking the lower bit of the face, even if it was not meant to be that way. I think a thinner one would work better.

Cheers,
Joel

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• Riccardo5000 (1499)
• [2008-03-08 1:21]

Hello Vaibhav,

Interesting, foreboding photograph. Dark and kind of frightening. I like it.

Richard

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• ola_kwiatek (9007)
• [2008-03-17 3:46]

Hi Vaibhav!
Original POV, very original composition. Mysterious effect. Great effect.
Cheers!

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• Hendrika (19218)
• [2008-03-23 11:14]
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Hi Viabhav,

I love the portrait.

Maybe there are a few things that will help you improve on it - if you are standing sothat some natural outside light reflects in his eyes, then the picture has more life.
Also a close crop is okay, but just under your dad's nose seems like he can hardly breath right - so give the man some space next time!
Just try again if he does not mind - he seems like a great model.

I made a WS to show that a bit lighter works better in my opinion.

TFS
Els

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• zhelach (8796)
• [2008-03-26 2:12]

Hello Vaibhav!
Great portrait! Good composition! Beautiful colors and lights!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

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• PierreCapoue (725)
• [2008-04-01 5:38]

What terrible portrait... :-)

A lot of strength in this picture. I like your choice for light and contrast. I regret perhaps just not able to distinguish the eyes (the look).

A nice shot
Best regards

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• billy-m (6310)
• [2008-04-02 3:36]
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Great !!Very expressive !!!!
I love it;)
warm regards and thank you for your kind comment
biljana

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• karl (726)
• [2008-04-05 5:42]

I may add some technical comments on this picture, as other people did.

But I think it a marvelous maturity and love you show in this picture, and that's a gift.

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• gavindya (140)
• [2008-04-08 23:12]

oh wow...
full of art.
very nice colors and nice POV (but heavy DOF).
this photo look very interesting and you really strong of characters.
very well done for this one.

rgds
Haldian

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• nishantdavid (1254)
• [2008-04-15 0:59]

Hello Vaibhav
Nice capture

Excellent lighting.