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Colors, colors and colors


Colors, colors and colors
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Copyright: Vaibhav bhardwaj (Vaibhav27) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 296 W: 61 N: 377] (1771)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-17
Categories: Nature, Artwork, Experimental
Camera: Nikon D-70, Tamron 18-200mm
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Collages and HPP work, 50-59 points Part Nine [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-14 23:34
Viewed: 678
Points: 80
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Colors Passing Through Us



Purple as tulips in May, mauve
into lush velvet, purple
as the stain blackberries leave
on the lips, on the hands,
the purple of ripe grapes
sunlit and warm as flesh.
Every day I will give you a color,
like a new flower in a bud vase
on your desk. Every day
I will paint you, as women
color each other with henna
on hands and on feet.

Red as henna, as cinnamon,
as coals after the fire is banked,
the cardinal in the feeder,
the roses tumbling on the arbor
their weight bending the wood
the red of the syrup I make from petals.

Orange as the perfumed fruit
hanging their globes on the glossy tree,
orange as pumpkins in the field,
orange as butterflyweed and the monarchs
who come to eat it, orange as my
cat running lithe through the high grass.

Yellow as a goat's wise and wicked eyes,
yellow as a hill of daffodils,
yellow as dandelions by the highway,
yellow as butter and egg yolks,
yellow as a school bus stopping you,
yellow as a slicker in a downpour.

Here is my bouquet, here is a sing
song of all the things you make
me think of, here is oblique
praise for the height and depth
of you and the width too.
Here is my box of new crayons at your feet.

Green as mint jelly, green
as a frog on a lily pad twanging,
the green of cos lettuce upright
about to bolt into opulent towers,
green as Grand Chartreuse in a clear
glass, green as wine bottles.

Blue as cornflowers, delphiniums,
bachelors' buttons. Blue as Roquefort,
blue as Saga. Blue as still water.
Blue as the eyes of a Siamese cat.
Blue as shadows on new snow, as a spring
azure sipping from a puddle on the blacktop.

Cobalt as the midnight sky
when day has gone without a trace
and we lie in each other's arms
eyes shut and fingers open
and all the colors of the world
pass through our bodies like strings of fire.

Marge Piercy
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hello brother,

very nice colours of your work.. andy warhol's style.. good pp work of the lotus or water lily leaf here.. wonderful result of your experimental. tfs.

regards, terry

hello vaibhav

good presentation of colors
nice pp work

good job,

tfs
jagroopsingh

Helo Vaibhav
Very very nice image and colors
TFs
Cheers,Braca

Good idea, reminding to pop art series...
Very well done!
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2008-05-15 0:47]

nice arrangement
good matrix of colors
well done

Olá Vaibav

Interesting colour composition. Very pop art colour composition. I like the concept very much. Great work.

My regards

Teresat

Hello Vaibhav,
Super, good composition and idea I like it ,very nice colours ...really very nice ... :o)
Regards
Rastislav

hello Vaibhav
what a wonderful shot is this
beautiful colours
lovely colours
wonderful presentation
sharp and rich

regards
Manuj Mehta
:) soon

Hello Vaibhav,
Interesting experiment. Well done pp work.
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2008-05-15 2:44]

Hi Vaibhav,
Great colorful idea :) Excellent PP work with great result. Thanks
Regards
Diane

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2008-05-15 3:33]

Vaibhav good morning
A very nice composition, different from your wild animals, but very strong and effective. Together with your nice poem we have a nice entity
Compliments
Argiris

hello Vaibhav
Great artwork.Lovely palete.
Well done
Greetings
J.Diogo

Hi Vaibhav,

Excellent PP work you've made to come up with this lovely presentation . .
Great idea my friend

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on Lonely but lovely .

Very colourful, good painting pallet, Vaibhav.
Jan

Hello my friend...

I liked your colored panel
a beautiful collage of colors and details!
good pp work of the lotus or water lily
Congratulations Vaibhav

Sérgio

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 557 W: 41 N: 849] (8440)
  • [2008-05-15 7:37]

kewl idea playing with the colors :)


Yan

Great collection of color variations! I like the idea and the way you put this together. The bottom left image almost seems vacant, but gives an interesting "entrance" into the whole:) Nice work.

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2737 W: 412 N: 2987] (32871)
  • [2008-05-15 8:33]

Merhaba myfriend Vaibhav....
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful colors....
Selamlar...
Milas...

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 0 N: 222] (1851)
  • [2008-05-15 10:11]

hello Vaibhav,

Great work! Very nicely composed with beautiful colors.

TLS,
Romeu

Hi Vaibhav,
Good graphism and excellend colourful details...
Sharpnes shot. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hello Vaibhav!
Wonderful collage! Beautiful colors and contrast! Nice frame! Lovely poem!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

Hi Vaibhav,
Interesting concept of portraying colors. Well processed and presented. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4250 W: 414 N: 6762] (42455)
  • [2008-05-16 2:32]

Namaste Vaibhav

Superb repetition of the waterlily, with the solitary waterdrop. A marvellous mosaic of color & graphism. Tfs!

Attractive experiment you are sharing here Viabhav.
Love the poëm you choose to go with the artwork.

TFS
Els

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 589 W: 164 N: 1405] (10149)
  • [2008-05-16 3:35]

Hi Vaibhav,
Nice idea using the water drop in the nasturtium leaf.
Clever use of all the colours, and an interesting note, TFS.
Peter.

Hi Vaihbav,
Very colourful image vith great presented.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Hi Vaibhaw, splendid palette with fantastic colors, wonderful and original composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi dear Vibhav
Great composition. Very interesting and unique way to show how You see this flower. TFS
Best regards
Melany

I love this shot !!! I love colors and you gave us such a beautiful work , very joyful and colorful :)
warm regards
biljana

What a wonderful palette presented here, Vaibhab! Excellent composition and presentation. The font you chose works very well with the frame and entire image. Well done!!!
Best regards,
Diana
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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1637 W: 118 N: 2819] (11374)
  • [2008-05-19 13:21]

Wonderful and original work, very fresh and remind the better of «pop art». Great note and aprpriated note.
My regards, mb

Very creative and well executed. Excellent PP work, with a nice palette of colors.

TFS,
David

Hii, excellent shot.

Hi vaibhav
A simple shot turned interesting through Photoshop.
Great Job

Hello Vaibhav, excellent PP work to get all the different colours. Well put together nd nicely presented. TFS,
David

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  • nface Silver Star Critiquer [C: 36 W: 0 N: 3] (457)
  • [2008-06-08 14:37]

Hello Vaibhav very nice colors and work

Recep

Lovely picture of the rainbow.

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1709 W: 124 N: 1465] (20644)
  • [2009-03-02 21:52]

Hi Vaibhav,
beautiful creative work.Congratulations.Necla.

Hi Vaibhav,
Nice presentation and composition of colors,
Great PPwork and details.
Excellent tone of colors and light.
well done.
Michel

Hi Vaibhav
interesting effect in your work
good idea and effect
have good week
ciao
Lucio

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