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simple geometry
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Copyright: lakshmi prabhala (clix_stuff) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 97 N: 378] (2303)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-16
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus Camedia C750UZ
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-30 20:37
Viewed: 1412
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
No points please!

Happened to noticed this boy among a group wo was busy observing others. I liked the simple colours and geometry here...

Any suggestions for the title would be appreciated!

Have a good week ahead!

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 10 N: 738] (10739)
  • [2006-07-30 20:46]

Hi Lakshmi,
I would saturate the colours a bit more. The picture brought back memories of childhood when we used to do the same thing with a tyre!

Superb shot, Lakshmi! Excellent composition, and such a good use of the ambient colours and light. An instant favorite!

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-07-30 20:52]

So good to see you again, Lakshmi. Very nice capture of this boy with the background colours and the tire beside him. A bit of a surreal scene. Excellent!

P.S. I am terrible with coming up with titles so I have no better suggestions than the one you have picked.

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  • zokakelt Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 216 W: 51 N: 13] (1397)
  • [2006-07-30 21:12]

Excellent work. Very good composition and colours.
Bravo!

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  • wenqing Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 115 N: 2010] (11857)
  • [2006-07-30 23:13]

well seen symetry here lakshmi :)
love the contrasting elements in the frame, colors and shapes
excellent work, i like how everything flows nicely

X

A great capture, good textures, colours and shapes, nicely balanced.

Geometry through photography....interesting concept to work on...though i feel you could have played a little with the colour schemes..

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2108 W: 92 N: 1851] (10261)
  • [2006-07-31 6:35]

Hi Lakshmi,
The photo is very nice with the different shapes and this little boy. Your title fit the photo perfectly. Very well done.
Luc

The simplicity of your photo makes it amusing and astounding, cheers.

Thanks,
Jeffrey

wonderful composition, congrats
selam

This is fantastic use of geometry and architecture!! I especially love the circle and square together in opposite corners, and the child with cute expression who seems to belong happily to the tyre. Great one, lakshmi!!

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-08-18 6:51]

Beautiful work. The positioning of the kid is perfect, between the sube and the circle, his expression spontanious, colors of his clothing adequate to maintain the attention and still avoid centering. Pleasing textures. Again - a beautiful work.

A.

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