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Photo Information
Copyright: Subhankar Gupta (onkar) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 1] (134)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-08
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Aquatic Flowers [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-06-28 6:43
Viewed: 403
Points: 6
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Hi, a very clear and sharp shot with good detail. The water ripples and drops have been well captured. Unsure about the position of the flower though. Regards, Jean

Nice sharpness and good, diffuse light in this photo. The reflections captured in the water are nice also.

I'm not entirely sure what you intended to photograph, here. Is it the flower? If so, the flower is in the wrong part of the frame to really have impact - and there is nothing else in any of the 'hot zones' of the photograph to suggest intended subject.

This is why a note is very important - without a note, viewers have no idea what you have tried to achieve in your photograph, so your work is unlikely to receive critiques or comments.

Keep the shots coming - and the notes - and I look forward to seeing more.

Rew

hi subhankar
i agree with Rew about the subject u took on the pic. in this case its not that clear. i think it maybe was better to focus on the flower. But well i dont think the picture is that bad... overall its nice
i dont agree with Rew a pic should always have a note. Some pics are just worth watching and speaks for themselves..
tfs
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  • pathy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 38 N: 70] (1734)
  • [2007-06-30 1:19]
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photo jolie dans son ensemble . je pense qu'elle aurait mérité d'etre un peu plus contrastée pour mieux faire ressortir le vert du feuillage

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