No one can stop my joy

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• monilit (409)
• [2008-04-28 1:45]

great capture
moni

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• rewshearer (15923)
• [2008-04-28 1:45]
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Hi Rajinald

A joyful image, you must be very proud. I encourage you to view others' images here in TrekLens and see how placement of subject, camera orientation, and crop can improve an image, even an 'action' shot like this.

For a start, I would wonder why you have included so much "unnecessary" imagery here - the food stalls behind your daughter. They may add context but they really don't tell us anything about your subject. This could be more closely cropped to eliminate some of that excess space.

Secondly, I think this would be more interesting if she wasn't in the middle of the frame. Off-centre has been found to have much more appeal. You may even find some useful advice in this page with articles about composition.

regards
Rew

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• manujmehta (4977)
• [2008-04-28 2:48]

hello Mr Milton
another beautiful shot from your lens
its a well composed shot
beautiful colours
one can easily find happiness of her face, a real joy.
good shot.
Thanks for Sharing

regards
Manuj Mehta

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• nishantdavid (1248)
• [2008-04-28 19:38]
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Hello Mr. Milton
a wonderful shot depicting JOY.
well framed and executed.
good job

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• Regiomontana (2265)
• [2008-05-18 15:03]

With globalization everything is everywhere. I can see the sign of "Nescafe" which I thought it was only in Mexico that we have it. Great face expression, and movement well capture. I wish I was a little girl with that beautiful thought "No one can stop my Joy". It took me many years to find happiness, and I have to confess that some books of people who lived in India helped me. TFS

Lorena

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• trulyisaac (8)
• [2008-08-17 7:28]

excellent capture dude..!!!