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Anticipation...
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Copyright: David Phillips (riverfriends) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1066 W: 253 N: 1762] (6684)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-09
Categories: Daily Life, Event, Decisive Moment, Experimental, Action
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon EF 70-300mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-11 11:17
Viewed: 538
Points: 54
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a simple 'stop-action' capture on a Basketball court. The expression of anticipating the pass from her teammate was what I wanted to capture.
It was a considerable distance to be able to use my EF 70-300 lens at 255mm. Since it was handheld, to avoid any long barrel shake detection I have used1/200sec. shutter speed. Since it was evening with the available ambient light, I increased the ISO to 400.
For a reasonable Depth-of-Field to give the image a separation from the background, I have use
F5.6.
No flash is used. The metering mode is
Pattern.
This is a result from canon EOS 5D camera & Lens Canon EF70-300mm f/5.6 IS USM.
Any comments & suggestions are welcome.
Thanks for viewing.
David

 

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 70 N: 749] (5148)
  • [2008-05-11 11:28]
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You have achieved in this photo what you wanted to do. I like the expression and the look on the girl's eyes! Good shot!

Andre'

Well done David.
Dennis

hi david, nice shot and good timing, you captured the expression you wanted, reminds me of my daughter about the same age who happens to play basketball also,
thanks for the tech tips,
thanks,
scott

Hi David,
Great portrait of the basketball girl. It's visible on her shirt she took the game seriously. :) Nice exposure and timing, wonderful capture. Tfs the image and the informative note.
Greetings from Hungary, László

Great work David, thoroughly clear and crisp with excellent light and detail, good DOF and bokeh.

Perhaps a slight crop on the right to get rid of that awkward elbow angle and cut-off forearm, but the shot overall works very well. Great work!

Rew

Hi David,
Very nice portrait of this child.Excellent POV, sharp and light.TFS.
Namasthe,

hAyAti

Hello David.
Simply, a stunning action portrait photo. Class A.!
Good stuff, you was using, but still the man behind, is doing it.
Congratulations with this result.
Regards from Jan

hello David
kaise hain aap
bahut badhiya action shot
amazing expression on her face.
is she surprised by get caught in the lens?
rich colours
nice tones.
Good DOF

regards
manuj mehta

Hello David,
Congratulations to you and your model. Highly impressive facial expression and well captured shot.
Fantastic...
Selahattin E

Hi David,

She really is into her game, she worked up quite a sweat. I think it is a lovely shot - the look in her eyes, the DOF, the hair blowing in her face, but she does not care, she is keeping her eyes on the ball.

Great job!

TFS
Els

Hi David,

As usual you share the detail on how you captured this image . .
The note is very useful and I learn from it . .
Great action shot my friend . .
She's watching you . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

:-)) will be back this afternoon

David

expresión natural gran cuadro

  • Great 
  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2008-05-12 14:54]
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Hello David.
Great, natural pose here on your picture and looks great. Very interesting note as well my friend.
My complimenst.
Janek Kloss

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1193 W: 39 N: 2133] (12567)
  • [2008-05-14 7:51]
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Hello David:)
Excellent shot with real reporter style. Technically excellent too.
My congratulations - Tom
:) later

Some good action shot here.
Goot timing, and still photo.
Interesting facial expression.

Quite spontaneous. And I like those kind.

Tom

Hello David

What a superb image, sharp and detailed, full of energy and a totally natural shot. Lovely expression I think you achieved exactly what you set out to do here.

TFS regards Helen

Hi David
Good shot. You have caught the moment even the sweat under her arm pits indicating the previous action. Now the anticipation of more action. Well Done.
Mike

Hi David,
Excellent portrait and beautiful action face here.
Beautiful colours and details.
well done.TFS.
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

Great expression!!! The hair in her face is looking great.
Well done.
David

Hello David,

Wonderful concentration and, as you say, anticipation! Usually the eyes work so well on their own in this kind of a shot but here, the skew of the mouth and the dishevelled hair play very important parts also.

I don't agree about the crop of the elbow. I think that helps to indicate her proposed direction.

Well done!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello David!
I like how you explain your picture!
Very good quality of image, perfcet clarity!
Excellent done!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 355 W: 44 N: 471] (1745)
  • [2008-05-19 5:01]
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Hello David,
Photo and title are one. ;0) Perfect capture, timing and title.
Nice technique and use of the tools to capture a stunning image. The hair, her eyes, the tension in her stance all captured perfectly.
Very well done,
TFS,
Wilt

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 738 W: 37 N: 1578] (10399)
  • [2008-05-19 16:31]
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Hi David,
Great title for a good capture. Nice strong details, super expression. WEll done and TFS Julie

Lovely teen portrait, natural and graceful. Well captured expression.

TFS,
Andreea

Muy buenos detalles en este fantástico retrato.
Excelente trabajo.
Saludos, Jl.

Dear Dave
Spontane.. a good snapshot.. good sharpness and colors..
Most of all the 'eye contact is the winner here
Namaste
John
ps
T F T feedback on lenses:
What is your idea of this one :
http://www.photozone.de/Reviews/Canon%20EOS%20Lens%20Tests/45-canon-eos-aps-c/194-canon-ef-s-55-250mm-f4-56-is-test-report--review

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  • WTS Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 289 W: 73 N: 238] (1217)
  • [2008-09-26 6:56]

David you have truly captured what you intended in this shot.
Not only her expression, but all the other elemnts, the aspect of being on the move, slight glistening of the skin from sweating.
As always you provide great notes.
TFS
Wayne

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