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Journey
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Copyright: Jayesh Bheda (jayeshbheda) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 68 N: 18] (166)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-05
Categories: Transportation, Experimental
Camera: Sony Ericsson K790i
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/640 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Mobile phone / Cellphone / Handy [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-11-21 7:54
Viewed: 355
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Train journey is my favorite way to travel. It provides plenty of time just 'to do nothing', which I enjoy.

Crossing bridges in train is always exciting for me. I took this shot through my mobile-camera (Sony Ericsson K790i).

The original shot (check the original resized image) was reasonably good considering it was mobile-shot. But I did not find good enough to post it on TrekLens.

So played with the image. But there was classical problem of of two heavily different light conditions. The upper structure was quite bright with sun-light and the train and second track were under shadow.

Therefore, if I was increasing some shadow to show the details of the upper-bridge, it was mostly covering the lower portion dark shadow and vice-versa.

So, I did HRD technique. Created two different image one with undertone another with overtone and merged them to gather.

I found the result some-what satisfactory , your critiques are welcome.

I liked the symmetry appear in the image. The bridge and train at the distant give the sense of infinity.

Regards,
Jayesh
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To tpstrek: Thanks !!jayeshbheda 1 12-23 04:47
To rminkow: Thanks !!jayeshbheda 1 11-22 23:44
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  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 3 N: 96] (2042)
  • [2008-11-21 9:27]
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Hello Jayesh,
I like the presentation of the shot, i think it looks very nice and effective border. Thanks for sharing, bye.

Excellent capture of geometry and light in this shot. I find the tilt you have used is very creative and dramatic, and I think your management of PP to deliver a controlled, balanced light is great.
Good post!
Rew

Hey Jayesh what a creative shot! I liked... I really liked the light coming from the end of the track...!!

Nice one!
Cheers,
Shubhi

Hi Jayesh...great shot...wonderful perspective and angles...nice details...good job.

Roger

Hello Jayesh,
Excellent compo from a great angle, showing a lot of depth, a lot of geometry and good lightmanagement.
Greetings,
Henri

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