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An old on street


An old on street
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Copyright: Manuj mehta (manujmehta) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1163 W: 80 N: 2819] (11900)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-08-15
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC FZ 50, Lica 35mm-420mm
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme for 2009/08/28 'Old Age' [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-08-28 0:36
Viewed: 335
Points: 100
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
So Nature deals with us, and takes away
Our playthings one by one, and by the hand
Leads us to rest so gently, that we go
Scarce knowing if we wish to go or stay,
Being too full of sleep to understand
How far the unknown transcends the what we know.


friends
he is one of those unfortunates who have everything in their home but because of their old age they have been sent out from the families. i have spotted this man in vrindavan, a holy place for hindus.

regards
Manuj Mehta

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To rewshearer: thanks Rewmanujmehta 1 08-29 00:16
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Hello, Manuj -
A unique and moving candid portrait. His sad situation is conveyed in his deeply lined face and hooded eyes. The b&w presentation compliments the mood. Very sharp and also well-composed with the man's head and arm forming an "L" shape along the left and bottom of the frame. I did not know about the practice of sending the elderly away from the home - is this common in India? Exceptional work, my friend - well done.

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15586)
  • [2009-08-28 0:42]

young or old it is a real beautiful people and very good portrait

Hi Manuj,

Fine detail and sharp image of this portrait . .
I love to see shot . .
Well done my friend

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Hello Manuj! Perfect work in black and white. Very interesting old man. Interesting scenery. Fantastic eyes. Good capture. Original portrait. Well done!

Namastay Manuj,

Wonderful protrait with great expressions! The quality of the picture is perfect with well detailed face of the person. The way he is looking into your camera, is just beyong imagination.

Very well done!

best regards,
Paras

Excellent close-up Manuj, nice use of the focal length. Your photos always look great in black and white, this one is no exception. Impressive sharpness and exposure, the focus looks very good too. Well photographed.

TFS,
Scott.

Hi Manuj, You have a remarkable way of portraying streetfolk in India. They give you such a sincere glance, you must be very non-threatening and approach them with honour to get such good result. It seems posible to see the soul of this older gent. TFS. Murray.

Hi Manuj
Beautiful portrait, though the bacground is a bit distracting.

Marek

Bonjour Manuj.
Une belle expression dans le regard de cette superbe composition.
Une suite parfaite dans cette série.
Bonne journée.
Urs

A+

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 2 N: 838] (10409)
  • [2009-08-28 1:35]

Hello Manuj
It has been shown on Brazilian Television (Rede Globo) , the largest TV net in Brazil, a very curious novel about your country.
The title in portuguese is "Caminho para as Índias" . I have seen so many beauties from there. Your country is curious and very fascinating!
Kind regards,
Nivaldo

Hi Manuj!

a wonderful portrait i think is my favorite after your little angel
priceless expression with a stunning clarity in his eyes
beautiful tones and light control
the details are terrific
Congratulations for your work!
Oana

Hello Manuj,
Incredible beauty of portrait. Incredible facial expression.
A masterpiece with clarity and good using of light
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4216 W: 414 N: 6609] (41919)
  • [2009-08-28 2:38]

Namaste Manuj

A superb b&w portrait, with excellent sharpness, tonal range & dof. Excellent textural details & reflections in the eyes. Tfs!

hi Manuj thought this theme would be right up your street my friend and i was right grt portrait work excellent details and expressions
regards bryan

Hi Manuj,
Nice, luminous and beautiful Black and white, (should I say, one more time))).

Love the detail of the garments, lots of texture in the whites.

Good exposure, and full range of tones with a smooth separation. Nice solid dark tones and well controled highlight. Well focus subject, sharp and crisp.

As for the portrait itself, well posed, direct and piercing regard. Wonderfull work again.

Hello Manuj, Namaste.

Terrific glance.
Fantastic details here. Strong mood.
A very clever pov. Respect.

Best regards

Hi Manuj,

another nice b/w pic from you. just excellent. nice mood captured here with great details and sharpness. his eyes expresses emotion and is in bad shape.

Tfs,
regards,
Sanjib

Hi Manuj,
A fabulous portrait of this old man sitting in the street.
A very pensive aspect in his face!
Very good grey tones and textures.
Very sharp features of the man with great details in the hair and beard.
A nice horizontal format!
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Bom dia Manuj,
A great and very sad portrait.
One more fine work here.
Regards,
Raimundo

Hi Manuj
What an interesting capture and portrait
Great face lines and looks
So meaningful
Take care
Burak

Hi! Manuja,
Wonderful B & W and perfect for the theme of Friday, perfect focus and composition extra. Bravo!
Well done . Have a good weekend
Tfs
Gaston

Hi Manuj...great portrait...your style is fantastic and your conversions to black and white are flawless..the expressions on the people you photograph are always interesting and moving.

Roger

Hi ManuJ,
Lovely portrait and beautiful contrast in black & white picture, Ecellent close-up and well presented and composed.
well done.
Michel

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 0 N: 1667] (13527)
  • [2009-08-28 8:23]

as usual a portrait full of caracter Manu,amazing eyes.

jan

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 3 N: 531] (3604)
  • [2009-08-28 10:05]

hello Manuj,
you have an excellent connection with your portrait subject here.Well exposed and composed. Black & white is a perfect choice.
regards,
Bev

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 23 N: 1853] (11198)
  • [2009-08-28 10:12]

Hello Manuj I hope you are doďng well.
Again you posted here an amazing portrait my friend!
Great contrasts and sharpness.
Wonderful expression and composition.
Well done!

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 569 W: 11 N: 1087] (4376)
  • [2009-08-28 12:02]

Hi Manuj,
Another wonderful portrait my friend. The eye contact and detail in the subject is excellent. The exposure looks perfect. Very nice work.
Regards,
Kevin

Salam Manuj Bhaijaan,
A wonderful B&W portrait vith great lighting, sharpness.TFS.
Namastey,

hAyAti

Hi Manuj,
Fabulous lighting here!
Wonderful texture and contrast.
Fantastic sharpness and DOF.
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Hi Manuj,

Very nice work you show here with this portrait where the B/W works fine, good composition and exposure, and the DOF stress his great expression.

Mario

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 693 W: 5 N: 1243] (5210)
  • [2009-08-28 15:31]

Hello, Manuj !
What an expression!
Amazing B&W portrait,very interesting
face, good contrast and details!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Good capture of this face, exceptional work on separating out the background too, your post work is always so effective in your portraits.

Rew

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3303 W: 787 N: 4421] (19888)
  • [2009-08-28 19:01]

Hi Manuj,
Powerfull B&W portrait! Impressive acuity in this portrait! The eyes are especially clear and sharp. Excellent nuances on his white cloth.
Finely done! Annie

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1004 W: 81 N: 66] (12086)
  • [2009-08-28 19:38]

dear Manuj mehta,
"old" is not necessarily bad, or good...
maybe the problem is the meaning of his time,
what he sees with his severe eyes is peace or anxiety, I don't know,
but a moment of this portrait shot, he looks feeling one small interesting to be shot.
the portrait can open the slit of someone's mind,
photo has the magic power, but he does not knew it...
thank you,
Akihisa

Hello Manuj.
Your portraits are just sensational. Perfect dof and sharpness, with superb lighting.
What a remarkable face. Excellent portret and composition.
Best regards Siegfried

WOW!

Hi Manuj,
Stunning, charismatic portrait. Superb for the Friday theme. I particularly like your chouce of B&W. The fine features of this guy;s face are so sharp and captivating. Awesome expression too! TFS.

Martyn

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 446 W: 103 N: 581] (2701)
  • [2009-08-29 11:26]

Hello Manuj
Stunning portrait brother.

This is the best one in ur gallary. loved the intense eye contact, expressions, texture and a very beautiful B&W!

Fantastic!

TFS
Regards,
JZM

Very gritty Manuj - the B&W really works well to show his leathery whiskers..
Also a well balanced feel to this image with the space to the left..

Nice work

David

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 38 N: 1262] (4336)
  • [2009-08-30 7:42]

hi Manuj,

what a story:( sadness is written all over his face, that glance, the wrinkles, sharp lines in the forehead, the white hair,,, you captured such story perfectly, ideal choice of B/W, the close up to show clearly the details, the glow in the eye, and the skin texture plus on his white clothing.. all seems too real in this shot.. he's about to say to speak!

compliments and regards
suzy

hello Manuj,

did i see his potrait shot before? just wondering.. too lazy to look in your gallery.. as long weekend with a holiday my connection always slow.. it's getting worse day by day.. took me ages to reply..

wonderful presentation and a lovely contribution to friday theme..

regards, terry

Olá Manuj!

This is a great portrait! Great B/W, focus and sharpness! Another excellent job!
Congratulations!

best regards
Marco

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 342 W: 0 N: 407] (2186)
  • [2009-09-01 10:51]

Hi Manuj,
Beautiful B&W portrait of this old man, the sharpness and clarity is brilliant and the contrasting shades are perfect. TFS
Bri

Hey Manuj how are you doing friend. Well I was lost for sometime from TL but am back to enjoy all the colors of the pictures that all of you my friends post here on TL.

Like always this portrait is exceptionally beautiful. The complete attention is drawn by the face. The sharpness, clarity and b&w treatment has done complete justice to this picture. Beautiful expressions!!

HAve a great day ahead!
Cheers,
SHubhi:)

PS: where r u these days.. sent so many invites to you on gmail??? contact asap ;)

Olá, Manuj!

Perfect focus, great framing and details.
Well done job as usual, my friend.
Congratulations and TFS!

Best wishes,
Bruno

Hi Manuj.
You have got number beautiful portraits in black-white. I think this one of the best with very interesting old man, lovely composition and fantastic eyes.
Good work.

Best regards,
Alex

Ciao Manuj


Wonderful capture and portrait,
Fine detail and sharp image of this portrait,
Great face lines, and glare.
A beautiful and excellent B & W portrait.
Composition and presentation are very nice.
Very well done,

Have a nice weekend,

Sergio

Hi, my dear, dear Manuj
Bravo my friend. Yes Your portrets is perfect and maestral. For a long time I didn't have time to enjoy in them.
Regards
Melany

Dear Manuj
Hope you are doing well
Great portrait of this poor man with strange eyes
Nice depth of field and sharp details as always
Thank you for another nice portrait
Alireza

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2230 W: 171 N: 0] (28742)
  • [2009-09-07 1:24]

Hi Manuj ;)
Wonderful B&W portrait with looon story on his face...
Best wihes,
J ;)

Hello Manuj,
Good grief...I missed this. An attractive portrait, full of soul. The b&w rendition is appropriate. Effective light management, tech details appear fine. Best regards...
Danilo

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