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Twin Lamps


Twin Lamps
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Copyright: Benyamin Lakitan (blakitan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 261 W: 67 N: 159] (862)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-12
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Lamps [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-06-13 4:23
Viewed: 786
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Somehow I start to enjoy taking picture of lamps in my home and did minor experiments with them. This is actually a picture of one lamp. I made a copy of it, flipped it, and then put it together with the original one. Truly, it was just a simple exercise. What do you think of the result I presented here….

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I like wild explosions of colour, and this is great!

If you're going to be taking more, then may i suggest changing the format to vertical and having the lamps at the bottom of the picture so that you have more space in which the light can gradually fade away into the dark. Maybe try changing your point of view, for example taking a photograph from above the lamps.

You've got a mass of options at your disposal and i look forward to seeing them in the future!

It looks great Benyamin, although it is a result of pp, looks real except that where light from both lamps overlap which should have had twice as much brightness in that area but well done anyway..

Alaettin

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  • clover (34)
  • [2006-06-13 4:47]

hi, benyamin!!!
i just want to say thet i like your photo! comosition is a little bit incorrect, but colors are beautiful. good job!!!

Very nice shot Benyamin. Good pp work, graphical effect and beautiful, warm tones...
tomasz

This is a good lamp shot! You're becoming the resident TL specialist in lamps eh.

I really like this shot, the "twin" lamps make some very interesting shapes in the light and shadows. I think it could benifit from some noise reduction however. A very creative idea, well shot and composed, excellent work.

Hi Ben,

Very nice composition, but with a little of noise, i think for the jpg compression, is too much. But is a great work with the light, i like the soft tones and the symmetry.

regards,

ferran

I think this is a very worthwhile experiment... it works... the light is slightly too bright.

also search for high dynamic range increase... will help with some light problems...

Good exercise!

Thats a cool shot and while maybe slightly overexposed on the lamp itself, not too bad. Very interesting natural duotone image. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Alla Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 113 W: 18 N: 63] (763)
  • [2006-06-14 9:36]

Interesting idea and experiment, Benyamin.
I think it will be even better in not that square format.
But anyway, well done! Alla.

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 521 W: 155 N: 339] (2979)
  • [2006-06-14 11:18]

Creating the duplicate lamp works very well in this case, making it a much more interesting photo. Nice product!

Hi Benyamin.
I like it this lamps, very good job.
Thanks for sharing, have a great weekend.

Yasin.

Nice work!

Benjamin. Warm colors and soft mood well captured. Soft graphism and shades.
Well done.
By the way . I am working on a WS for our friend Lucbus. Check it out tomorrow. I have to wait , my daily limit is reached.
Cheers!
Robert

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 508 W: 0 N: 18] (5400)
  • [2006-06-19 11:17]

Hi benyamin
Nice composition. Good idea and great colours.
Well done

osse

Well done. A simple but elegant image! I hadn't realized that it was a reflected image 'till I read your note.
Mike

Hello Benyamin,
I like your idea. The symmetry in the photo looks very nice. Well done.
Regards,
Valeria

Hi Benyamin,

Great PP work here! The low lighting adds to the composition and the colour tones are lovely!
Well done!

Constantinos

Well done. Good shooting. Very nice 2 lamps.
Nice lights.

Kerem

excellent picture, i like it very much

benyamin,

excellent PP and superb colours
also thanks for the notes


tfs
jon

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2499 W: 56 N: 3862] (17478)
  • [2006-08-09 7:50]

Hi Benyamin,
Very good experiment,perfect work and wonderful colour,gread composition
Congratulations.
Janusz

sorry poinds tomorrow

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1919] (10149)
  • [2006-08-26 7:22]

Hello Benyamin,
gread composition,but colours and light.Interesting shop.
Congratulations.
Eva

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 831 W: 52 N: 418] (10387)
  • [2006-12-11 10:09]

hi Benyamin. i'm impressed by your ideas.
nice work. tfs

Shogun

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