Ellen #1

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• phredz (65)
• [2009-08-12 20:10]

WOW... jadi pingin mimik tutu! Expresinya kayak kecekek ya pak... :)

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• Christie (101)
• [2009-08-12 21:02]
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• Irfandisurya (36)
• [2009-08-12 21:22]
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• rewshearer (21031)
• [2009-08-13 2:33]

Hi Arfa

Glamour photography is a tough genre, of course it helps to have a beautiful model and a textbook location - both present here!

Technically, I think it could be better. There are blown-out highlights on your model's arms, I don't think the angle of her face is quite right here - her chin is too high - and the bottom of the frame blocks one breast; let's be honest, they are an important ingredient in the mix with a shot like this.

I think a little more space - vertical composition - with less blowout and a slightly different pose, and you would be on to a real winner.

Rew

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• deltadeff (158)
• [2009-08-13 9:43]

well done, great shot bro...
just a little hard light on left arm which is seems not contrast with the skintone...
Other then Nice...
Sorry if my english belepotan, I use it rarely...

regards.

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• erickkick (161)
• [2009-08-13 10:55]

nice BW pak.. kere pose modelnya. Tapi menurut gua sih, lebih bagus kalo loe ambil agak jauh dikit lagi dan keliatan sisi kolam dikit pak, jadi ketauan kalo dia akan keluar dari kolam ceritanya... IMHO.. semoga berkenan pak... *back to taste aja sih pak...

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• moli (12582)
• [2009-09-02 13:50]

Hello Arfa.
Beautiful girl in nice way captured and presented.
Very effective shot.

Regards
Janek Kloss