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Black bird
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Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1870 W: 88 N: 3363] (15952)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-22
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Nikon D100, AF-S VR Nikon 70-200mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-22 1:10
Viewed: 758
Points: 64
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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While enjoying local soccer game, I observed this black bird searching for food . . With a bit difficulties to capture at the same level with it . . and this is it . .
Only few moment it stays before flying out . .
Slightly crop, add frame and resize . .
I don't know the name of this bird . .

Hope you like it . .

Thank you for viewing it . .

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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chrisJ, Josine, juyona, trekks, JohnTulip, MLINES, XOTAELE, vandana2923, inaam, Refugee, boomcat, jusninasirun has marked this note useful
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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4256 W: 414 N: 6770] (42500)
  • [2008-01-22 1:14]

Apa kabar Tjutjut

Good, shallow dof, & superb sharpness on the black bird, with excellent lighting & tonal contrasts. Terima kasih!

Bonjour Tjutjut
Très joli portrait de cet oiseau noir bien géré dans une DOF sélective.
Bonne journée.
Cordialement
Gildas

I like this! Great composition and colours. Sharpness and details are excellent and the lighting is great. Well done and TFS
Josine

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 557 W: 41 N: 849] (8440)
  • [2008-01-22 1:30]

Tidak mudah untuk menangkap sebuah burung hitam. good detail Pak, Tetapi sedikit distract untuk object yang didepan

yan

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2646 W: 1 N: 1267] (15455)
  • [2008-01-22 1:53]

Holaq amigo,
preciosa captura,
bella composición, colores, y bg.
excelente trabajo,
saludos

Hi Tjutjut,
What a great portrait of this Bird.Sharp, colours, details, light and BG are perfect.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

Hi Tjutjut,
Beautiful bird,nice shot.
Best regards,
Ralf

Good morning my friend

Nice shot here, excellent focus and light giving realy good view of the feather detail. Small shame about the bottom left blur but only a lot of grass cloning could really remove that and it would take forever. Nice neat framing suits the shot well.

TFS regards Helen

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2008-01-22 5:56]

Hi Tjutjut

Very sharp focus on your subject and the turf it is standing on.

Great BG blur by using a long focal. Good capture at this pose of a good stare.

Nice work. TFS

bill

  • Great 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1555 W: 124 N: 2196] (20277)
  • [2008-01-22 8:16]

Hello Tjutjut, great bird shot my friend, very nice details, good exposure of that black bird and lovely background. Very well done, thanks !

Mario

He looks what we call" A crow (Kraay in Dutch)
Everything about this shot works for me. Good sharpness and POV
Nice to see this sort of 'moustache' on his beak :-)
Terimah kassi my friend
Bye
John

looks like a crow to me, good capture Tjutjut, what can i say! sharp as a blade.you have a keen eye my friend,well seen.
regards ..................andres

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  • wieyos Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1115 W: 43 N: 2153] (9006)
  • [2008-01-22 15:22]

Hi Tjut,

imej burung yang sangat jelas & "bersih". BG nya apa memang asli begitu, Tjut? cantik. Congrats.

Regards
Agoes

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2008-01-22 16:30]

Hi Tjutjut,
The punk bird :) Great DOF and superb colors of this black bird. Excellent shot. I like it
Regards
Diane

hi thutjut, great shot, amazing dof and clarity, great colors and compositon, brilliant shot, well done, thanks,scott'


ps, blackbrid by paul mccartney is my favorite beatle song!

Salam Tjutjut

Nice shots on this bird bro, adakah ini sejenis gagak... congrats

Amri HMS

Hello Tjutjut,

I have never seen a bird with such a prominent moustache before! You have taken a lovely sharp shot of him here! Excellent detail of the texture and colours of his feathers! (I think I would have cloned out the grey in the corner just to make the whole shot great!)

Kind regards,
Bev :-)
Many thanks for your kind comments on 'Fower Fantasy'.

Hi Tjutjut. The clarity in this and virtually all your photos make me weep that i cannot achieve such sharpness, but inspiration that one day... Very good DOF in this shot. TFS. Murray.

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2272 W: 177 N: 0] (29260)
  • [2008-01-23 1:54]

Hi Tjutjut ;)
nice shot...TFS
Best,
J ;)

Hola Tjutjut,

Espectacular esta gran toma, me gusta mucho la profundidad de campo dando al motivo el protagonismo que se merece. Muy buen trabajo.

Saludos,

Pako

Mas Tjutjut,

Bagus photonya nih, aga flat sih lightingnya tapi masih dapet detailnya. tinggal color adjustment aja yang aga kurang nih.
tfs

Haldian

Hello Tjutjut.
Nicely captured bird.
I find the blurred bg a bit too crowdy.
Best regards from Jan

Hola Tjutjut.
Excelente nitidez y buenos contrastes.
Buen bg y acertado encuadre.
Saludos, JL.

Salam Bro,
Foto ini sungguh mengkagumkan sekali,saya terpikat dengan hasil kerja bro kali ini,cantik depth nya..dan color hitam pada burung ini sharp sekali..well done bro...

Salam,
Anan


Thanks on F/T "Portrait @ 2"

  • Great 
  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1289 W: 69 N: 1538] (7679)
  • [2008-01-23 12:31]

Nailed the focus and exposure with the medium size lens. Like this guys head wear. Perfect clarity on his eye.

dan

Well captured Tjutjut with lovely detail in the feathers. Nicely composed with a good background. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Around Our Garden VIIII’

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 57 N: 1045] (6681)
  • [2008-01-24 4:32]

Hi Bang

This is excellent POV with good details and sharpness. Love the unuusal feathers on the forehead of the bird, macam burung gagak juagk but i am not sure my self..

Thanks for sharing bang this lovely bird

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

Hello Tjutjut,
He looks angry with those feathers on the beak :-)
Good shallow DOF and composition. TFS
Vandana
later

Raven? Crow? gua pasti yang ne Raven, bro Tjutjut.. nice shot with clear look and detail.

well done, bro..

regards, terry

  • Great 
  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2008-01-24 7:48]

Hello Tjutjut,

A portrait of the bird is beautifully composed here. Fine details and excellent luminosity. Point of view is exciting. A wonderful shot my friend, well done.

Thanks for sharing this shot.

Hello Tjutjut,
I like the detail with the feathers over the beak!
The close-up work is well done, with sharp fine reproduction of details and colours in the plumage...
A well balanced, classical composition with a good feeling of depth!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hello friend,

This is a very nice Javan Mynas. Excellent details and very good plumage. Well framed in good light.
Thanks for sharing this and very well done.

Regards,

Jusni

p/s: I have posted a real swan. :-)

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