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Tukang Ketoprak


Tukang Ketoprak
Photo Information
Copyright: Yan Manarsar (yanm) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 558 W: 40 N: 848] (8422)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-22
Categories: Food, Decisive Moment, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D-70s, Nikkor 18-70 AF-S DX ED f/3.5-4.5, Hoya 62 mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-11 0:49
Viewed: 580
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ketoprak is a kind of food here, basically from Jakarta. Made of rice that overly cooked in a coconut leaves called "ketupat" and fried tofu, and some veggies. then poured with peanuts souce.

And this movable food vendors usually using that kind of equipment. Its compact, and simple. But still I think it quiet heavy to carried all around.

The picture was taken in Kebun Raya Bogor and I work with it to give that light effect and dreamy look like.

Hope you like it and welcome to all critiques and comments


Regards


Yan
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Critiques [Translate]

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3546 W: 737 N: 2382] (18952)
  • [2008-11-11 0:54]

Superb piece of work; congrats !

v

Hi Yan,
Very nice photo. I like the mood, colors, and effect a lot. Is it the real big tree in the back or it's all composed digitally?
TFS,
Phavin

Amazing shot! The blurred background is creating a very dreamy look. Beautiful.

Cheers,
Shubhi

Wow! What a fantastic photography, Yan! I love it!
Great tones and mood created with your pp-work. This is top notch! Very well managed composition and framing.
TFS,
Freddie :)

hi Yan,

wah hasil kerja yg cukup cantik dan mantap.. aku bilang superb pp work.. bagaimana juga cara step by step pp worknya ne? how i wish you mentioned it.. supaya aku pun boleh ikut.. hehe.. jgn marah ya..

kok ketupatnya aje dijual? satenya? teringat aku ex bf aku yg half jawa half malay suka bangat makan sate :D suka soft effect yg kamu pakai.. oh cantik sekali pokok sebelah kanan tu.. excellent work..

regards, terry

Hi Yan
Very nice shot & good job

**MAB**

Nice effect you created here. I like the way that you have really made the people the focus of attention, but I feel that the top left side is just a shade overdone and slightly lacking in detail where you have faded it out a bit. Just my personal opinion but I would have preferred the detail in there, still faded out but maybe not quite so much.

Hi Yan,
wonderful light effect makes your capture really dreamy look like,
interesting tree adds a lot with its beautiful detailes,
great work indeed,
welldone my dear friend and tfs,
warm regards,
Taner

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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 123 N: 488] (7363)
  • [2008-11-11 7:50]

bonjour Yan,
Superbe réalisation, cet effet brumeux en BG mélangé à la lumière porte toute l'atmosphère.
Avec cet arbre imposant, on a l'impression que le temps s'est arrêté et que les personnages ont été ajoutés au décors.
Bonne journée

Karèle

ah.... pusing nih liatnya.... ajarin dunk....

rgds
Haldian

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  • Jali (4)
  • [2008-11-11 10:08]

Very nice shot. great work.

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1453 W: 23 N: 0] (11654)
  • [2008-11-11 11:23]

Hi Yan...
Beautiful shot with nice scene...
Regards...
Andro

Hello Yan,

Fantastic atmosphere.
Wonderful shot. You have my admiration

Daisy

Hello Yan

Absolutely wonderful! a superb original capture thats very nicely balanced with good strong detail. I really like your PP work here too as you say the result is dreamy and its very effective.

TFS regards Helen

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  • Ramdan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 701 W: 31 N: 1420] (5756)
  • [2008-11-11 16:45]

Hi Yan,
WOW!!! this reminds me of my favorite Indonesian Rarindra.

Simply marvelous! You did an excellent touch to the shot giving it a real dreamy feel. Waduh! Sempurna penghasilannya, Yan.

Salam
Ramdan.

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  • wieyos Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1115 W: 43 N: 2145] (8968)
  • [2008-11-11 20:26]

efek yang sangat bagus, Yan! komposisi yang kuat dengan POV yang mengesankan. subjek manusia dan akar pokok memberi perbandingan ukuran yang cukup bagus.

saya kira ketoprak itu sejenis tarian drama...:)

Makasih!
Agoes

Hey Yan
A good effect you have managed here. The composition is very interesting with the little boy getting dwarfed against the huge trunk. Just wondering how the picture would have looked without the vendor there. The kid and the trunk!
Mukesh

hi yan, this has an awesome dreamy feel to it with wonderful unique colors, well done!
tfs,
scott

Boa noite Yanm
Amazing.
From another world the treatment.
congratulations.
My regards
teresat

Hi Yan,

The way you can create a mood I recognise as made by you.
Of course all the right ingredients are there,
that huge tree, those people selling food and a perfect composition.
It's a very enjoyable picture.

TFS
Els

HI
this a good photo too
you are a very good photograf
Ciao Paolo

Hi Yan,
Wonderful atmostphere provided by the lovely soft shades of green. Wonderful tree trunk!
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 13 N: 491] (3539)
  • [2008-11-15 9:34]

Great cultural capture -- both the food vendor and the tree. I like the idea of giving diagonal light a help here. TFS. Karin

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  • johnre (42)
  • [2008-12-29 7:16]

Wonderful capture with a story to tell. (makes me hungry too) The child and tree add a to the message. The background works well.

Nice Job.

John

You have created a wonderful mood. Well composed too.

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