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:: Circus Street In Action ::
Photo Information
Copyright: Offpeak ITB (masmarkovic) (26)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-19
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Sony A300, Sony 55-200mm., 4GB Sandisk CF Card, 55mm HOYA Circular Polarizer
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/125 seconds
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-25 21:48
Viewed: 181
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Tall stacks are common, but there are people on it who make extraordinary.

Criticism and suggestions expected, please input. Thank you.
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Welcome to TL. This interesting street scene is certainly worth a photo. I hope you don't mind if I make two suggestions:
1. Crop from the right to move the main truck away from the centre and to remove the dark (almost out of frame)cyclist.
2. Add a little contrast to increase impact.
I'll provide a workshop to check if these suggestions work.

Hi OP, & welcome to TL! Apa kabar?

Good framing & sharpness in this superb daily life scene of the trucks, & excellent colour & light contrasts. The workshop has boosted contrast & cropped the right side nicely. Bagus sekali, dans terima kasih, untuk photo ini!

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 0 N: 1670] (13545)
  • [2009-08-26 11:26]

Yess!!!! this is th Indonesian roadlife as I know it,well done mate.

jan

great snapshot,
more better if you not make the framing.
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regard
klepoon™

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