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milk shake


milk shake
Photo Information
Copyright: mentari putri (taby) (8)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-16
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/16, 1/15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-07 22:36
Viewed: 247
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
only a small work work, from my learning process.

please guidance
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non male come effetto
bella saturazione
forse un tempo di scatto più veloce
Anda

Hello Mentari,
Foto yang bagus karena saya sendiri belum pernah punya eksperimen seperti ini. Saya suka komposisi dan warna. Mungkin sedikit over exposure di spot-spot yg kecil sehingga seperti kehilangan milk texture-nya. I'm not an expert anyway :)
Thanks for sharing and welcometo TL! Salam, Imelda

Salam Mentari,
U are here now...hehe
Welcome to the real world of Photography.. :•)
I like u picture here,....nice work and keep posting...well done my friend.. :•)

Regards,
CM

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1470 W: 23 N: 0] (11726)
  • [2009-10-08 2:00]

Hi Mentari...
Welcome in TL...
Nice shot and decisive moment...
Regards...
Andro

gorgeous forms
but a pity the milk areas on the top are burnt so much
jc

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 3 N: 212] (2865)
  • [2009-10-08 14:17]

Hi Mentari,
I was surprised at how slow the shutter speed was (1/15sec)that probably explains the OE of the droplets at the top - keep trying
cheers
Jack

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