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Copyright: eko sumartopo (arkana) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 0] (1851)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-07
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Canon EOS300D, 18-55mm EF-S Lens
Exposure: f/11, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-12 5:31
Viewed: 887
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Still my model Q...any critics are welcomed
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The idea is great, but you should have worked on it more ;)
I mean: the solutin of the layering is well performed, excepted around (between) her legs, you should have avoid there the transparency IMO.
I like anyway very much your shot Eko.

TFS

Marco

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-05-12 6:38]

hmmm... i like it.

Must agree with marcocig re- solutions in the leg or crotch area (!). And showing some more of her hands and hair would not hurt. Generally ok, though some improvements can make this one a killer shot.

A.

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  • seppe Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-05-12 9:08]

very impressive !
like it a lot.

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  • DarkoG Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 257 W: 14 N: 88] (1014)
  • [2006-05-12 14:27]

Good work, this photo could be a excellenw visual critic of modern age sex slavery.

Woman, whos legs are around steel bar as in strip tease club and chains and doors that could be dors of prison cell simbolize destiny of many womans taken for sex slaves.

Congrats
DArko

Eko,

very intersting model for the " shoes challenges"

check this out:

This is SHOES CHALLENGE RULES were written & updated by Kit Florendo

Following the success of the COFFEE CHALLENGE (See theme for all the resultant images) and the HANDS CHALLENGE (SEE 100 IMAGES IN THE THEME FILE) and now the BICYCLE CHALLENGE, Maria74 has chosen SHOES as the next subject and this challenge begins WITH EFFECT FROM NOW.

1: The subject is ‘SHOES’ - singular or plural. (any kind of footwear is acceptable - sandals, slippers, boots, gumboots ... )
2: The posting date will be Jun 15, whenever that date reaches your part of the world. Early entries are discouraged but will be accepted.
3: The closing time is midnight that date in Hawaii.
3A: No late entries will be allowed. Not one. Be warned! Your posting date/time is displayed and I will check.
4: Multiple entries will be accepted . *NOTE THIS CHANGE FROM PREVIOUS CHALLENGE RULES
4A: Your entry must NOT be one that has already been posted on TL. Be honest! We trust you.
5: Post your entry as a normal posting but title it SC- XXXXX, with the XXX being any additional title you wish to add. This is so that I will recognise an entry when I see it.
6: All entries will be copied across into a PERSONAL Theme file, titled SHOES CHALLENGE, so that all manner of spurious entries/images do not creep in and confuse everyone come voting time. View all entries in that theme file.
6A: Any additional images that may be generated as a result of the Challenge will be added to the theme file subsequent to results being posted.
7: Voting will begin on June 18 and will close on June 24 *
8: One vote per person and giving your top FIVE choices e.g:
5pts – MAE – PUMPING IRON
4pts – MEL - SNEAKERS
3pts – ARNOLD – SLINGBACK
2pts – GEORGE – WHITE COURT
1 pt – TOM – SHOE BOMB.
Please do NOT use links.
* Note that the above quantity of FIVE votes is a change from previous Challenge Rules
9: Votes to be cast via e-mail, either via 'Contact Me' on Kit's Intro Page or to Kit ‘expat’ e-mail address if you have it....

For more further details please visit the forum SHOES CHALLENGE RULES or SHOE CHAT

This shot for RUN & SHOT theme but when I heard that Gaylen chose shoe is new challenge (included sandals) so I posted here with some work on PS to spread & notice for every body who are interested to join with us.
WAKE UP and TAKE YOUR CAMERA

I love the power of that pose, it's excellent! I have to agree that the double-exposure effect with the chain and gate just doesn't work, your portrait would be a huge winner on its own.
TFS.

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4605)
  • [2006-10-05 22:49]

the pose is great, but i am not quite ok with the heavy post processing...

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