fris@sunrise

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• lancegreen (94)
• [2005-09-14 2:41]

Can't quite place what it is with this shot, but something doesnt look right. It as if it were two shots pasted over each other. I think it could be the colour temprature of the flash. It's so blue, but the light behind is so orange. It just doesn't work for me.

Jolly good effort though. Perhaps less power from the flash would have helped. Just a guess mind.

Take Care,

Lance

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• surfacing (0)
• [2005-09-14 2:58]

I agree with Lance, the flash light was too strong and it's colour should be filtered with yellow or orange filter. But i like the composition - excluded small part of rock behind the back of the model - to be cropped or cloned out.

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• ruudblok (22329)
• [2005-09-14 4:17]

This kind of photo’s become unnatural. But there is no other way when you like to show two beautiful thinks sun down and a model. Good work but less stronger then your previous work

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• PixelBurner (378)
• [2005-09-14 6:51]

I'm sorry all you other guys, I think it is a great effort and captured well, come on, it's a good composition a great subject, I know how difficult it is to get a shot like this and considering there is a second flash invloved just makes the shot even more difficult. If you want to complain about the difference in colour balance you could at least tell the guy how to sort it, isn't that what treklens is all about?! Fadjar, you could try making a selection of the girl and alter the colour balance in photo software to bring it closer to that of the backgroung.
Good luck, hope you repost it because I would like to see the comments then!

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• GlenC (787)
• [2005-09-14 21:00]

The details are superb! A very unusual effect for sure but it does force the focus onto the model and that's good. I really like this picture a lot Fadjar. It's a very good capture.

Glen