Mariana Renata

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• lancegreen (94)
• [2005-09-21 0:08]
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Mariana is stunningly beautiful, but neither you or her needs me to tell you that, so let's stick witht he photography shall we...

Pose, is innocent, the viewer is not. I for one couldn't help but to peek down her top. Not that I saw anything, but the viewer just can't resist it. Less is more, and you have proved that concept very well here.

Love the tones, and would like to know more about how you did it. I am guessing that one layer was desaturated and the colour layer's opacity diminished till happy with tone. Please put me out of my misery!

I not too sure aboutv the focus on this one. Something seems to be off around her cheek. Perhaps I'm being a little picky.

Regardless, Love the shot, totally reminded me to be less obvious with beauty.

Thanks,

Lance

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• Valich (7)
• [2005-09-21 0:19]

Nice work. I like the way you make available light work for the model.

And model is charming.

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• arkana (1851)
• [2005-09-21 0:50]

wow..excelent Job

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• suedwaerts (1117)
• [2005-09-21 1:53]

a very natural looking portrait of a beauty! good work.

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• lukdm (1350)
• [2005-09-21 2:29]

This is a masterpiece, and the picture as well

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• wck (3843)
• [2005-09-21 3:48]

Superb Beauty.... TFS

Wong

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• Janice (33054)
• [2005-09-21 5:10]

She is a beautiful young lady, so pretty and natural. Good lighting and colours. You have captured a very content expression. Well done.

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• ropetko (0)
• [2005-09-21 5:34]
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Very beautiful model again, congratulations! :)
The composition and her pose are excellent! I love the natural frame of her hair, hand and arms, that's really great. And yes, you've placed her eyes on the perfect compositional spot, but as well as her bra, you naughty! ;)
Light was managed in a very nice way and she looks very beautiful here.
I must say that I don't like what I saw many authors from far east do with face skin - blur it to achieve porcelan tan. Well, that really doesn't fit here, you didn't achieve shallow DOF, because we can see her beautiful skin on her neck and decolte (is that the word?) very clear, so blurring the cheak and lips wasn't that good move.
Still, you've captured the true beauty in a beautiful way. Great job done!

Regards
Robert

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• mukesh (4777)
• [2005-09-21 7:22]

She is beautiful and she is on my hard disk. This is yet another well shot rendition of her charm. And this also goes to my hard disk.
Thanks for yet another lovely picture Fadjar.
Mukesh

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• edie (0)
• [2005-09-21 7:44]

Lovely model and wonderful portrait.
Bravo!
Edie

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• fmg (503)
• [2005-09-21 20:24]

Thanks God someone invented autofocus...In my hands , in manual mode the disaster would be eminent...
Well, the composition is very good, almost as good as the beauty of the model, with a well controled light and shadow balance.
Congratulations.

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• Ejla (2488)
• [2005-12-22 4:46]

Very nice lighthing and composition, as the PP indeed. No need to repeat everything that ropetko said . :D

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• Donald (38)
• [2006-06-27 6:54]

I love every thing about this fantastic portrait, the light the pose the DOF perfect
regards
db

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• MLINES (8484)
• [2007-11-03 13:02]

Hi Fadjar. A delightful portrait with excellent tones and clarity. As good as it gets. TFS. Murray.