Stairs

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• Drew (205)
• [2006-09-05 3:54]

Hi

Nice photo. The simplicity of this is nice, mixed with the complexity of the lines of the stairs. I also like how one half of the photo is the sky and the other the furnace tank, so nice composition. The detail you have captured is also very good.

Nice one

Drew

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• sedat (784)
• [2006-09-05 4:03]

hi yan,
good comp.
and dynamic line.
TFS.

sedatdemirtas

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• rewshearer (20919)
• [2006-09-05 4:03]

Hi Yan
I like this. :) Light and colour are excellent, and because of the positioning of the furnace tank, I think the composition is fine too.
Good work, thanks for sharing
Rew

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• ben-u-ron (4051)
• [2006-09-05 4:59]

Very well done!

Cheers,
Carla

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• tracer (7924)
• [2006-09-05 5:07]

Hi yan,

you have seen it well.

TFP!

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• zchizzerz (6987)
• [2006-09-05 8:24]

hi yan,
well seen. i like the contrasts between the sky and rusty tank. the stairs are centered but it gives an illusion that it's not. just a little tilt will make it super-dooper. tfs!
jeff

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• tournesol (12862)
• [2006-09-05 8:25]

Nice industrial shot, Yan! Your composition is fine in my book; although the stairs are centered, you still have 1/3, 2/3 in surface. There's a lot that could be done with these shadows.... Well done!

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• lollie (62)
• [2006-09-05 13:16]

Very well seen, bravo, i love the tones and compo, bravo.

Steph.

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• clnaef (5769)
• [2006-09-13 4:27]
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• Artichoc (606)
• [2006-09-19 8:57]

that is very good, I like yor compo, the colors very good, art

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• cepekdonk (1439)
• [2006-10-19 13:36]

menarik dan bagus sekali ! ada satu yang mengganggu saya: keteduhan menara di atas kanan tidak terlalu sesuai dengan bingkainya ... kenapa sebelah kiri menara tidak diclone dari bawah ? meskipun begitu sangat indah !

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• Darlene (1211)
• [2006-11-27 8:47]

Very good shot!!! I really like it. The compo is good, and you made a nice crop. I also like the colours.
TFS! Darlene