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long way to go


long way to go
Photo Information
Copyright: Ekajati Winarmo (abangkojat) (154)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-17
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), Canon 18-55mm EF-S f/3.5-5.6 II
Exposure: f/8, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-28 22:35
Viewed: 653
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Picture taken at Segajah Island, Bontang, East Borneo, Indonesia, during a hunting session with Badak Photographer Club (BPC)..
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yes very very long way to go my friend.. lets give him a ride ;) very good comp, strong perspective which guide eyes through his way to the end...
well done
Ali

What a pretty starfish, I like how you composed the shot keeping the star fish in the corner, showing the long way it has to go. Very nice clarity and detail of the start fish and the sand. The sand is soft colored and it makes the star fish look bolder. The soft wiggly lines of the sand are interesting and draw the eye through the shot. I like the framing choice you made it adds class to the shot. TFS
Dayna

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  • tsumeb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 58 N: 269] (2130)
  • [2007-02-28 23:35]

Nice work. Excellent composition. Well done. Welcome to TL.

nice first shot
welcome to TL
i like is
very well composed and sharp
tfs
M.

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  • Big Gold Star Critiquer [C: 95 W: 0 N: 0] (1509)
  • [2007-03-01 3:51]

Beautifull composition!!
So simple and so perfect!
very well done!

Hugo Tinoco

Beautiful composition. Good job!
jowel

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  • pamar Silver Star Critiquer [C: 44 W: 0 N: 0] (164)
  • [2007-03-01 3:59]

Great picture. I like the low point of view and the position of the seastar in the low right corner. It gives to the eye the possibility to go on the beach.

Marco

A beautiful shot. The composition is excellent, with beautiful non linear lines of sands, which build a delicate perpective and suggest the path this lonesome starfish has to go. The soft tones of colors and the sobriety of the scene, participate to the mood. Well done!
A good choice, to start your contribution on treklens, to open the way!
Mango

Jolie composition, qui fait rêver...
Marie

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-03-02 4:01]

Nice, the sand patterns gives a trail effect.
cheers,
Cristian
..later

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6098 W: 199 N: 3115] (12490)
  • [2007-03-04 7:54]

Hi Ekajati,

Beautiful look of this composition, their colors in this beach are wonderful, very good composition, strong perspective.
I like stars of the sea, they are beautiful!
Congratulations

Sérgio

Hi, Ekajati.

Welcome to TL!
Wonderful composition. Excellent sharpness and contrast. Good prespective. Very well seen. TFS (",)

Regards,
Vanya

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  • Uza Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 17] (982)
  • [2007-07-31 7:27]

another good one :D
very matching title
composition , colours etc.. all in here I like :)
cheers
Iza

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 692 W: 2 N: 128] (3536)
  • [2007-10-19 1:34]

good capture
tfs
regards
lavanSJ

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