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Jaka Tarub


Jaka Tarub
Photo Information
Copyright: Yan Manarsar (yanm) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 558 W: 40 N: 848] (8422)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-23
Categories: Artwork, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D-70s, Nikkor 18-70 AF-S DX ED f/3.5-4.5, Hoya 62 mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-18 3:44
Viewed: 2844
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is the second picture of the interpretation of Jaka Tarub legend story. I did made pictures up to the end of the story, but I will stop here. At least you already knew about the story. And would like to thank you for all your comments and critiques for the previous picture :d


Yan

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Hendrika: Thank you very much Elsyanm 1 05-23 00:40
To tjutjut: Hi Mas Tjutjut.gavindya 2 05-21 19:40
To Jan: Middle areayanm 1 05-18 04:09
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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 123 N: 723] (4827)
  • [2008-05-18 3:54]
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This is avout the time he stole her scarf....
Another great photo. The story is on the left and right site of the photo, the middle is a little bit empty and says nothing... I that on purpose??!!

Well done! Great pp-work!
I am still curious about the other photo's....

Jan

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  • zen79 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 4 N: 8] (384)
  • [2008-05-18 4:00]

Congratulations Yan, it's a really beatutiful picture. I like so much the clean texture, the point of view and the colour. Your composition and light work is excellent too. Thank you for share.

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 68 N: 327] (2335)
  • [2008-05-18 4:09]

Hi Yan,

Great artwork, great PP-work! Like the way you tell a story through these pictures, or better still, artworks.

Regards,

Edwin

Hello Yan,
So Nawang Wulan left Jaka Tarub?
Another creative presentation, Yan.
Excellent piece of art. Love it how you tell the
interesting tale through your work.
Splendid!

Best regards,
Sharina

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4225 W: 414 N: 6642] (42045)
  • [2008-05-18 4:43]

Hi Yan

The b&w checked cloth is synonymous with Bali (I saw it almost everwhere throughout Bali, when I visited there some years ago), & nice to include it here, too. Good sharpness & lighting, in this superb fairytale like composition. Bagus sekali, dans terima kasih!

Hi Yan
Magical photo!
Regards, Lucja

Hi Yan, it's very good photo, nice pov, interesting concept and many details.Good colours and sharpness.
Best Regards
Monika

C'est une très très belle image,et un vrai travail d'artiste.Bravo ! je suis admiratif des teintes de l'eau et du ciel et de la lumière.
Cordialement,
Antoine.

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 23 N: 1853] (11208)
  • [2008-05-18 6:05]

Hello Yan,
Another superb picture!
The colours and the light are great.
Wonderful PP-job again.
Greetings from Holland,
Adri

hello Yan,
a very beautiful visual and atmosphere
great artwork with colors and light well managed...

best sERGIO

oniric composition, well done PP job, i like the soft colours,
regards
jo

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 0 N: 222] (1851)
  • [2008-05-18 7:39]

Hi Yan,

amazing image! Wonderfully done pp work.

TLS,
Romeu

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1465 W: 23 N: 0] (11700)
  • [2008-05-18 9:18]

Hi...
Beautiful artwork...
Beautiful composition...
Best regards...
Andro

Hello Yan,
stunning one indeed,
i really love smoothness of it,
superb compo, excellenet work,
welldone and tfs,
regards,
Taner
:) tomorrow

Hi Yan,
Professionally processed ... I like the 'fairy like' wonderland scene. Well captured and presented. Excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

hi yan, neat image, excellent colors and composition, it tells a story, tfs
scott

Hi Yan,

Ini memang diperlukan imaginasi yang sangat kuat . . dan anda telah membuktikannya . .
Saya kemarin hunting ke Kota tua Fatahila . . ada dua model . . he he . . belajar dari Aldhy dan anda . . saya sudah bisa sedikit-2 moto dengan penuh keyakinan . .

Salam,
TJutjut

hehehe serial nih ceritanya...
ini jakatarup atau orang ngintip hehehe
bagus baget nih kerjaannya. tapi yang ini engga sampai bikin gw gedubrak hahhaha

tfs
Rgds
Haldian

Wow, such an art you've done there. The person i like peeping a girl at the river. Well, a good creative work. The legend is illustrated there. (^_^)

Ananfocus.

hello dear yan

this is brilliant work again
superb effects

excellent composition
welldone!

tfs
jagroopsingh

Absolutely stunning work Yan, have to go back to get the story behind this one.

The light and atmosphere are otherwordly beautifulful.

TFS
Els
:)

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 96 N: 1022] (8472)
  • [2008-05-28 22:30]

Hi Yan, At first i missed the lady washing her hair, but now see it. A wonderful, quite surreal creation. Exactly right for TL. TFS. Murray.

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