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CURVES
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Copyright: Yan Manarsar (yanm) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 557 W: 41 N: 849] (8440)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-23
Categories: Architecture, Mood
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday theme 2008/12/05 Curve Curved or Curves, graphic &/or abstract 3 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-12-04 1:58
Viewed: 363
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is the stairway in from of Catholic church in Kuta Bali. I add some flowers to give it a color touch. And i thought it suit the theme for today.

Thank you for taking time to look and welcome to all critiques and comments

yan


Camera : Canon 400D
Lens : Canon 18-55mm
Filter : UV + CPL
Shutter speed : 1/100
F : 8
Tripod : None

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Hi Yan!
Amazing stairs. Good perspective. Perfect capture. Original minimalistic composition. Very sophisticated work.
Cheers!

hi Yan
realy good shot love the way you placed the flowers on the steps realy adds to the finished photograph
regards bryan

Hello Yan,

Your pov has made this far more interesting than a front view would have done. The curves make good leading lines.
You were right to add the flowers. They create a focal point and add a littl colour.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Very interesting art work for today's theme. Well done.
Best wishes,
Achim

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1701 W: 124 N: 1454] (20512)
  • [2008-12-04 3:24]

Hi Yan,
what a nice compo.Very creative.Congratulations.Necla.

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 578 W: 0 N: 1577] (9107)
  • [2008-12-04 4:01]

Hello Yan!
Very curious picture...colors and light.
It pleases me.
It congratulates execution.:)
Greetings.
Barbara

Nice work, I love the lines and the splash of colour against the grey. I think had it been mine I would have put the flowers in the next square towards the left!

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 529 W: 23 N: 1855] (11276)
  • [2008-12-04 4:55]

Hello Yan,
Great capture here!
Wonderful grafic art in this photo.
You added the flowers on the right place!
Well done.

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

a smart choice for a good POV here, Yan, from which perspective the stairs nicely look like terraces! (seperti teres sawah di Bali itu)

ah, bunga siapa tercicir di situ....:)

Makasih
Agoes

ME ENCANTA LA FORMA DE VER ESTA IMAGEN, MUCHAS FELICIDADES ME PARECE UN BUEN TRABAJO SALUDOS

Great idea; lovely composition. Excellent POV. TFS

Lorena

superb curves well framed, and a little "coquetterie" with the flowers
regards
jc

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  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 8 N: 306] (3099)
  • [2008-12-04 14:35]

Nice curves and a good idea with the flowers. Makes it more interesting.

willemien

Hi Yan,
it is an amazing contribution to the theme with wreat pov,
partial saturation add a lot to the compo,
welldone my dear friend and tfs,
warm regards,
Taner

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
  • [2008-12-05 3:43]

Hi Yan,

Good composition, You did very well to put the fowers on it.
Well done!

Best Regards, Marga

hi yan, nice curvature, the add of the flowers is a little bonus but i love theese lines and textures,
tfs,s
cott

cool and cold photo nih.
komponya ok banget.

nice pov, great colour saturate.not sure if flowers slightly toward left bottom wld be better?

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  • ringfokus (166)
  • [2008-12-17 12:29]

Komposisi dan tone-nya muantap plus warna bunga yg kontras, sungguh campuran yg tepat. Salut...


salam
TS :)

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