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DAYANG III


DAYANG III
Photo Information
Copyright: yopie pangkey (yopiefranz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 8 N: 240] (1641)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-11-22
Categories: Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX
Exposure: f/8, 1/250 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-11-22 6:32
Viewed: 235
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This afternoon i asked Dayang to wear clothes that she used to use and i did not direct her any poses in this shot.
Dayang has a natural beauty without any make up on her face and she's 18 year old.

Under a cloudy circumstance I used 2 speedlites with trigger and receivers.

PP work:
level
sharpen some part
color balance
blend: soft light (2 times) with 60% opacity
conversion to BW using brush mode: color
resize
unsharp 40%
frame

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Bonjour Yopi.
Belle image B&W crée avec la complicité d’un beau modèle.
Le contraste et parfait et met bien en valeur le sujet. Bravo.
Bonne journée.
Urs

Great location! I do like the real, natural feeling of this - and the no makeup contributes to that. The light here works very well with the strong spotlighting effect on Dayang.
That looks like a dangerous place to sit, already there are some missing bricks - the structure must be very weak!!
Nice work with the lighting
Rew

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  • Mitch Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 94 W: 19 N: 234] (1038)
  • [2009-11-22 11:29]

Nice shot, Yopie.
A good strong contrast and sharpness to match.

The arch and offset, off centre model set a really good imbalance that works well, with the gentle curve of the rounded building.

Very natural pose, but with the strong contrast and lighting, sets a very moody image.

I like this a lot,

well done

Martin

Boas yopie
You make very good portraits...very well composed and interesting psotures.
Um abraço
Teresa

Hello, Yopie -
Excellent portrait -- I like the creative composition with the arch perfectly centered and framing the model, who is offset. Her pose and expression are very appealing. Nice tones and sharpness. Excellent image.

HI Yopie..nice shot..very good tonal range..nice work.

Roger

Hello Yopie! Wonderful girl in window. Amazing scene. Perfect black and white work. Ideal POV and capture, very good frame. Original effect. Good luck!

Yes she's got a natural beauty! And her position, her look, her so teenage like appearance contrasts strongly with this surprising background. Love it! Cheers
Manu

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