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RHIEN III


RHIEN III
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Copyright: yopie pangkey (yopiefranz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 8 N: 210] (1420)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-09-13
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-20 9:25
Viewed: 255
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
i give, i take
but balance has to come
not just me searching for you
......
Located at:
Local museum
MAP


PP work:
curve and level
sharpen
color balance
convert to BW with brush (mode: color)
resize
sharpen again
crop
frame

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 11 N: 102] (1725)
  • [2009-10-20 9:59]
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Hi Yopie... great composition... a higher angel can also work here.. but still your angel is still effective! I like the BW treatment and the sharpness of your photo is fantastic! are you still using the infrared cam here? well done... TFS

hello yopie
how are you?
nice shot, good conversions, nice details, the pose has an attitude and low pov has worked well here
love these light and shadows
nice depth

regards
Manuj MEhta

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1399 W: 0 N: 1695] (13693)
  • [2009-10-20 10:21]

People like you are the best ambassador for Indonesia,liberation and respect for the female beauty,bravo Yopie!

Sehat2 pak!

jan(buru Bakkara)

Hello Yopie,
There is an edge, a very good one, to this b&w portrait. It is smooth and chic, akin to those I see in magazines. Please accept my compliments.
Danilo

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 386 W: 0 N: 460] (2461)
  • [2009-10-20 11:03]

Hi Yopie,
Great shot, this looks like a still from a B&W movie, it has nice tones and a good perspective. TFS
Bri

Hi Yopie,

A perfect portrait with strong expressions by your beautiful model! I like the way your model is facing the camera. A confidence, a proud and the way she looks in one direction, is wonderful.
The B/W version works very well here. The sharpness and lower POV are perfect.

Great work, my friend!

best wishes,
Paras

Salut Yopie

Judge has the quality of the picture? Or the beauty of the model ??
Both are beautiful !
bravo
jp007

Great shot - good use of location, innovative POV and striking angle, and great interaction with your model too.

Possibly the only (slight) drawback was the short focal length that has created some distortion in the scene, but it's minor!

Rew

Hi Yopie..nice strong shot...excellent perspective and composition..nice tonal range...

Roger

Hello, Yopie -
Very creative portrait - love the setting and the POV from low looking up. Great pose and expression. Very sharp, good choice of monochrome. The overall compo is excellent. Well done.

Hello Yopie,

This is extremely good black and white shot.
Excellent point of view, composition and light.
I like the pose of the model.

Best regards,
Tatjana

Boa tarde Yopie
Love the composition and the B/W work.
A good photo.
Um abraço
teresa

Bonjour Yopie.
Belle prise de vue en contre plongée qui met en valeur la photo et le modèle.
Félicitation pour cette bonne prise de vue.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 281 W: 27 N: 719] (3453)
  • [2009-10-22 8:58]

Hi Yopie,

Another striking portrait...beautiful!

TFS
Ramon

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 0 N: 1053] (5172)
  • [2009-10-22 14:18]

Hi Yopie,

A very beautiful picture. Excellent colors.
Why play this beautiful portrait! Congratulations.
A beautiful evening,
Adrian

Hello Yopie!
Wonderful and artistic compo! beautiful portrait!
Lighting,shadows,contrast and perspective,all are great!
Perfect facial expression of your model and ideal low pov!
Your image looks like a movie promotion poster !
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Hi Yopie, Good to see some of your portraits for the first time today. I like the POV you have chosen, it has a professional look about this image. Ideal model. Good work, tfs. Murray.

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  • solrac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 273 W: 0 N: 59] (2517)
  • [2009-10-28 11:05]

Bello retrato con excelente dominio de la luz y el B&W
buen trabajo
un saludo

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