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• messenger1 (4272)
• [2009-10-24 7:04]

Hello, Yopie -
Quite an interesting and unusual portrait. She's a beautiful model for sure. I like the artistic touch provided by the slight tilt to the frame. I don't mind that the subject is centered here; sometimes that works well. The lens distortion creates a sort of dream-like effect. Not sure whether it would have been better to include all of her legs and feet, but that's very subjective. Well done.

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• marcocig (3500)
• [2009-10-24 7:21]
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Hi Yopie,

I like your personal interpretation of this portrait. Dont mind too about the centered figure, but I would have manage differently the light; the girl is suffering with those grey tones, which almost fades into the bg. I would have use better the flash light, which given brightness more on her legs than her face.

M

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• ele_eng (6042)
• [2009-10-24 23:33]

Salam Yopie

I like how you've used a wide lens to capture your portrait, its a different job!
This is an attractive model, good lighting in this outdoor shot
Center composition is a good choice here

TFS, Alireza

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• hay_kes (56620)
• [2009-10-25 11:00]

Salam Yopie,
A woderful B&W photo vith excellent lighting and nice model.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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• Teresat (8517)
• [2009-10-25 18:12]

boa noite yopie
I love the composition.
Um abraço
teresa

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• urs0114 (4617)
• [2009-10-27 4:01]

Bonjour Yopie.
Une belle photo noir et blanc comme je les aime.
Une image qui garde un certain mystère.
Bravo et félicitation pour cette belle création.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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• prometej (1050)
• [2009-10-27 10:42]

Hi Yopie
nice composed
good lights and nice contrast
also and the girl is beautiful.
have a nice week
Riste.

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• ramon (3335)
• [2009-10-28 11:22]

Yopie,

Very nice wide angle portrait.
The tilted horizon makes it more dramatic.

TFS
Ramon

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• solrac (1997)
• [2009-10-30 1:56]

Buen retrato encuadre y profundidad de esta imagen y el virado de color
felicidades
buen trabajo
un saludo

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• tjutjut (15948)
• [2009-11-08 5:54]

Hi Yopie,

Wah ini dia wide angle shot . . Lensa bagus banget tuh . .
Saya suka dengan penampilan BW seperti ini . .
Bagaimana kabar anda?

Salam,
Tjutjut

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• S-moon (2291)
• [2009-11-21 5:11]

Hi Yopie,

Beautiful perspective! Maybe the lighting on the model could be better (more in her face) but it realy is an interesting photo to watch. So many details and a very nice POV. Frame work is perfect! Well done!

TFS Greetigs Simone