jalopy (old version)

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• starkey666 (2748)
• [2006-02-12 22:05]

Good capture of the rust and the different layers of paint on this very well aged car.

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• graemann (5150)
• [2006-02-12 22:19]

nice shot jatmica.

rust and paint, lights and all.

Good framing too. But the flash was seen or too much light??? Try adding more shadow? Maybe it wil help

TFS.

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2006-02-12 22:54]

I have an idea it's actually out of warranty i presume... It's always lie that with problems! Well find! :)

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• SkyF (6138)
• [2006-02-12 23:06]

Hi,
great cut and angle. Excellent Details and colors. Nice composition.
Sky

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2006-02-12 23:29]

i like the composition here Jatmika :)
very nice details and textures

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• zunnun (963)
• [2006-02-13 2:53]

very nice colors & details u got - lighting is also great. TFS

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• iliannak (3500)
• [2006-02-13 3:11]

wow great textures and colours :o)
TFS it
ili :o)

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• dorisday (2039)
• [2006-02-13 3:15]

Hello Jatmika,
I wondered what happened to my old blue toyota!!
I like this subject very much, it's one I would do myself. You have selected some interesting shapes in the car to make an abstract. I think the light was too harsh this day, could do with a bit of toning down.
Karen

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• pozaru (19140)
• [2006-02-13 3:52]

Very nice painting !!! Not the car's ... yours ...

thanks for sharing,
vlad

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• HIMself (3574)
• [2006-02-13 4:32]

hi
good detalis
nice photo

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• voodoo (0)
• [2006-02-13 9:29]

Very Good!
composition, metering, subject are all fantastic.
Love it!

Matt

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• wolle (561)
• [2006-02-13 14:05]

nice detail of a Landcruiser ?!
I like the strong patina of your object.
TFS,
jan w.

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• marak (72)
• [2006-02-14 21:15]

This car seems to have lived a hard life, you captured it well! It was bad that the light was so harsh! A more discreet lightning would have had added so much to this old friend.

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• marietom (286)
• [2006-03-03 2:13]

encore une superbe trouvaille. Belles couleurs.
Marie