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Her Name Is Kokom


Her Name Is Kokom
Photo Information
Copyright: Rangga Mauliza (mnir) (295)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-21
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 30D
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/20 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-28 11:17
Viewed: 1560
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She's a friend of mine. And she wish she can became a model someday. In this session I try to make she look more glamour.
Thanks for all critics...
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helo,
WOW! The tones are real silky, the light is good, the model is perfect!

Balázs from Hungary

Very lovely, the model, and the photo.
I really like how her flesh on her belly, hand and face make a triangle bringing our eyes to make a circular movement going from one spot to the other. The choice of black background and sofa really is great and well managed. You are good.

...when i can look this beautiful girls ... i think and miss ur fantastic country..
Fantastic effect of contrasts
ciao,
denis

...and she looks very very good!
With some good help from the photographer, of course!
Regards,
Pablo -

Hello Rangga, I think some part of the pic could have been a bit brighter. I feel the dark parts are underexposed! Or is it just my monitor?? :)) But Kokom is really beautiful!
Thanks for sharing!
cheers
ToM

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 70 N: 331] (2375)
  • [2006-02-28 12:16]

Excellent portrait! Nice touch using only to basic colours black and white. Did you buy a new camera as this was not taken with a 30D?
Regards,
OWO

Nice to meet Kokom !
Your photo is a good homage to her beauty ...
She has good chance to become a model ! :)
Well done !
Sylvie

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  • denjoe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 0 N: 144] (2443)
  • [2006-02-28 12:29]

Nice portrait. Beautiful subject. Nice flattering light.

This is a very good portrait. The light is so soft and natural...I really like the backgroung you chose and the model certainly looks like she knows what she is doing! Very well done!

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  • deekay Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 80 W: 67 N: 0] (10)
  • [2006-02-28 14:07]

Hey Rangga,
I would like to bring something to your attention: the position of your model there is not really the best: in the background you can see this vase/plants just behind her and it looks like itīs coming out of her head. itīs not very obvious because itīs dark but once you see it, itīs quite disturbing. it would have been easy to avoid by removing it or choosing a different position.
And also, IMHO, the fact that she is wearing black on a black couch and with a black background is making her fade into the background.
But the good thing is I think she is very pretty and that you captured a very glamourous expression :-)
DK

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  • Klaud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 107 W: 5 N: 124] (1762)
  • [2006-02-28 18:25]

Very well composed and great tonal value

very nice picture. she got a very strong glance.

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