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Early morning
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Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1831 W: 82 N: 2884] (13545)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-20
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D200, AF-S Nikon 17-55mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/20 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): 100 points or more [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-10 0:06
Viewed: 668
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 104
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Early this year I have a chance to spend one night at Bromo mountain . . Stayed at a resort hotel . . and drived to Pananjakan, an area that is designed for tourists watch sunrise as well this mountain composition . . at the FG is Batok montain, then on the left is Bromo mountain . . then the far end is Semeru, an active volacno . . That is the second shot . .

I am planning to go to this area next month, with expectation to get better view than this one . . I love this place . .

The itinary going to this place:
From Jakarta by plane 1hour flight to Surabaya, then drive by car to the east (Probolinggo, small city) around 2 hours, and drive up to nearest village from Bromo another 1 hour, then stay one night . . early morning at around 03:00 am, drive with special vehicle to Pananjakan, take around 1.5 hours to the other end of caldera . .

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Thank you for viewing it.

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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as always a fantastic capture Tjutjut.
I think it would be greater if at least one of the mountain peaks was further off-centre. That would really enhance the composition by providing good symmetry.

Photographic quality is however very good and details are nice and sharp.

Best regards, Daniel

Just a beautifuly shot, Tjutjut - the cloud formations and colours throught are a delight to see - no wonder you love this place. Great shot, well executed!

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  • ralph Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 171 W: 13 N: 234] (3425)
  • [2007-09-10 0:24]

It is a beautiful place Tjutjut.We will be there mid Dec,hope it's not to wet.Wonderful composition with the clouds separating the layers.Clear and sharp.
Nico

Hello Tjutjut,
Amazing subjects!
Wonderful light and very well done...
It is a good composition with sharp fine details!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Tjutjut,
Woooww!!What an amzing capture.Great colours, POV and superb atmosphere.well composed.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

Hello my friend

Wow.. this is just awesome. What an amazing sight you share with us here, wonderful colours and an incredible view

Lovely work my friend

TFS regards Helen

Very nice landscape...Nice composition, nice colors...

Hello Tjutjut,

Wonderful shot you got here! I would have liked to see the darker parts just a little bit darker, but that's personal. Just for fun, I added a workshop ;-). Nice shot!

Greetings from Sumatra,
Dennis

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1442 W: 0 N: 164] (10772)
  • [2007-09-10 2:59]

Hello Tjutjut!
It's splendie! The cloud formations give good feeling. Great composition and colors, I like it. Thanks
Regards
Diane

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1194 W: 109 N: 3094] (15341)
  • [2007-09-10 4:02]

Exceptional capture Tjutjut, Love your composition and amazing cloud formations.. Well done.

Cheers
Dawn

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3989 W: 207 N: 3331] (25413)
  • [2007-09-10 4:32]

Hi Tjutjut

I've been across Java 3 or 4 times, & still haven't seen Gunung Bromo, so thanks for sharing. Bagus sekali!

Bonjour,
Belle présentation et couleurs agréables.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

Great composition with good light! Good job. You have captured it very well with excellent details.
Best wishes,
Achim

hi there, this is a nice shot, excellent point of view and the smoke from the mountain is anice bonus, the light hitting the smoke is neat too, well done,
thanks scott

hello tjutjut!
wow, this is amazing shot, i like it.
great view on this peaks.
tfs
zoran

wah mas tjutjut ini selalu membuat saya jadi tertarik untuk membuat photo2 yang beda,
pertama2 photo binatang.... sekarag pemandangan... kayanya kalau pemandangan aga susah nih waktunya untuk jalan2 hehehehe
tapi photo ini bagus baget, kaya lagi berada di awang2 ya, terutama awan atau asap yang ada persis diatas gunung... focus dan detailnya jelas sekali.
makasih ya....

Regards
Haldian

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1549 W: 0 N: 1] (9807)
  • [2007-09-10 9:46]

Hi Tjutjut
This is a ver beautiful view of this mountain.
Gr Jos

Great view.
Just simply amazing!

Splendid!
Thomas

Hallo Hayati

Wawwww aber as ist eine wunderschones Bilder..
Gute arbait meine Freund..
;-)
L.G.
Ella
:)

Salam Tjutjut

Ini sungguh cantik dan memang aman... suasana yang begitu tenang and menarik...

Amri HMS

nanti sore ya ;oD

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  • NecipP Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 714 W: 17 N: 523] (6625)
  • [2007-09-10 17:01]

Hi Tjutjut beautifull colours and good sharpness a fine shot tfs rgds Necip.

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2813 W: 504 N: 2944] (13316)
  • [2007-09-10 19:48]

Hi Tjutjut,
Lucky man you are to see a such beautiful and rare landscape! Amazing POV and splendid contrasted colors. Very, very good photo! Bravo! Annie

Hi Tjutjut,

Amazing colors.
Fantastic image.
Wonderful fire and water combination.
Congrats
Selahattin E

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1697 W: 58 N: 0] (15292)
  • [2007-09-11 3:20]

Hi Tjutjut ;)
waaaaw...congratulations...Great photo...nice feeling...
J ;)

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

Hallo Tjutjut!
Einzigartiges Foto!glückwunsch!
Grüsse!
monika

Impressive capture. Colors, sharpness and details are excellent.
Seems like the mountain is spewing fire.
TFS
Pierre

Hi Tjutjut.
Beautiful photo,good light.
Regards.
Ralf

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3041 W: 241 N: 5402] (20210)
  • [2007-09-11 5:47]

Wow!
That is an amazing capture -- colours are wonderful, details excellent, textures terrific -- nothing in this I would want to change
TFs
silke
:D

Hi Tjutjut!
Wow!Such a great view!Very good photo with an excellent colours and compo!
Well done!
Cheers.
Cezar

Hi Tjut,
Just stunning - how I envy you for standing here and seeing all this.
TFS
Els
:)follow

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1520 W: 111 N: 3314] (13334)
  • [2007-09-11 14:41]

very amazing clouds.. I love the orange colors...
perfect place to catch a sunset.. But boy from your notes its quite the journey!


Tricia

Hi Tjutjut,

Wowwwww !!! menuda captura es realmente fantástica, y la composición genial, muy buen trabajo.

Saludos,

Pako

What a scenery Tjutjut, all have been said already.. well captured, thanks

aK

Hi Tjutjut :o)
Wow ! Incredible shot ! So rare to see such landscape ... Lovely colours and great POV, TFS
I heard on TV your country was threatened by a tsunami today ... i pray for not.
Marylou

breathetaking view Tjutjut! seems on the top of the world! lucky you to see the wonders of nature. colors are lovely.TFS!

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4800 W: 180 N: 5506] (29721)
  • [2007-09-12 12:13]

Hello my friend Tjutjut

Amazed with the beauty of his pic.
it is too wonderful, as it can!
Wonderful light and very well done...
It is a good composition with sharp fine details!
Picture of High quality and visual!
Congratulations, overcame in everything.

Sérgio

Una vista impresionante a la vez que fabulosa.
Colores excepcionales, perfectos..
Saludos Tjutjut, JL.

Wow, impresive shot, great detai.ls colors and contrast,Congratullations. TFS

rintile

Straight to favorites!

TFS

Simon

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1094 W: 89 N: 846] (5925)
  • [2007-09-12 23:20]

Hi Tjutjut. An excellent view if this active volcano. Maybe linked to the current spate of earthquakes in Indonesia. It is certainly an active volcanic area. Excellent colours. TFS. Murray.

Hi Tjutjut,
waw! what a stunning view! You are really lucky to visit this kind of places :) Wonderful colors and perfect frame for a beautiful composition. Congrats!

Have a lovely day!
Ioana

ive been there in 2004 and it was great
but wow that sky you are taken
wonderful
great shot
tfs
M
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Hello Tjutjut!
Really fantastic capture!
Beautiful colours and interesting atmosphere!
Excellent done!
Best regards!
Lili

Hello Tjutjut,

I really like this pOv alot well composed and captured photo excllent details very crisp well done with great details very crisp excllent Job

TFS kyle

Hello Tjutjut.
Wonderful captured and great shot.Very beautiful composition and colors.well done.TFS.
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

Hi Tjutjut :)

cantik sekali gunung anda ini.. berapi ka ne? komposisi yg sangat baik.. tahniah!

saya tidak merasakan apa2 semasa earthquake di tempat kamu the day before yesterday.. cuma ujan lebat dan angin kuat bunyi seperti teriakan perempuan.. agak takut juga..

syukurlah kamu tidak apa2 dcna tapi kesian mereka di tmpat kejadian itu.. apa pon teruskan ibadat puasa bro sampai sebulan :)

terry

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 59 N: 1045] (6661)
  • [2007-09-14 4:47]

Hi Bro,

Wow..

What a view. Beautiful landscape captured.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1261 W: 119 N: 1825] (15131)
  • [2007-09-14 17:36]

Hello Tjutjut !! That's another great one my friend ! Incredible composition and light, good details and very exotic location...for me ! :-) Thanks !

Mario

Hey Tjutjut
Must be a great view over there
You shot is showing that very well
Nature in his strongest form
Wonderful
Ruud

Superb Tjutjut. Lovely colour and light and well composed. The striation marks in the peaks and the clouds add so mucgh to this image. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Tamar Tranquillity IX’

WOW Tjutjut! A stunning shot of this Volcano and the wonderful light on the smoke! Very nice clouds in the foreground! All in all an eye catching shot!
B-)
Linda

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1725 W: 5 N: 347] (1240)
  • [2007-09-16 8:49]

Hello Tjutjut,

Your composition is very beautiful. An excellent moment from nature has been nicely captured with high aesthetic sense. The blazon illumination on the clouds in the background is looking fantastic. Well done my friend.

Thanks for sharing this image.

Hello Tjutjut !

Missed this cutie ! This is the type of shot , we can only be envious. Boy , we would love to be at this POV , and enjoy the same view once in a lifetime . Super composition. Strange and beautiful combination of cold and warm morning colors.
Bravo!
Robert

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