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A story from Malabar # 3


A story from Malabar # 3
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Copyright: Ari Widodo (ariw) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 27 N: 162] (2125)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-14
Categories: Nature, Experimental
Camera: Olympus E-300, Olympus Zuiko Digital 14-45mm f/3,5-5,6, Hoya 58mm UV
Exposure: f/8, 1 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Waterfalls [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-15 9:39
Viewed: 446
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
When I was in Malabar, a vast tea plant in west java region, I travelled around the area and found a small water fall, I took a rest for a while there and took this shot to memorize of this peaceful place.

PP work : levels adjustment, gaussian blur, color balance and cropping

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Wonderful pp work - nice dreamy atmosphere from the gaussian blur. I like the colours and the use of light.

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  • rater Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 215 W: 52 N: 111] (957)
  • [2007-09-15 11:40]

Like a fairy tale, great long exposition, gives a great atmosphere. Well done!

r.

Hi Ari
You've achieved an excellent effect here with the overall darkness of the photo, compared with the luminous effect of the water.
Great use of the slow shutter speed to soften the waterfall. The gaussian blur on the surrounding rocks works well to create a mystic kind of atmosphere too.
Nice work
Rew

Halo Ari,

Sudah lama banget ngak berbagi dengan kita . . Banyak pasien ya?
Saya belajar banyak dari histogram yang pernah anda share dengan saya, dan saya semakin ngerti bagaimana membaca dan mengubahnya agar pas . .

Foto anda menarik sekali dengan air terjun yang nampak seperti lukisan . . Inipun saya belum pernah nyoba dengan speed yang lambat . .

Saya dapat kiriman foto Anggrek dari Leanne karena saya cerita tentang gempa yang saya alami dikantor.

Salam,
Tjutjut

wah... kemana aja pak Ari ini....

keren baget air terjunnya, sama seperti mas Tjutjut, aku juga belum pernah coba yang seperti ini, mungkin suatu saat akan saya coba kalau saya punya sedikit banyak waktu.
terima kasih ya.

regards
Haldian

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 2 COLORS - 3

Average: 2.86

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

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