beautiful beach & u

Critiques [Translate]

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-10-23 21:28]

the horizon is not straight and its overexpostured and I miss a part of the girl
composition is ok but the light is too distracting

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• Kilted-Arab (9143)
• [2007-10-23 22:00]

You have posted 64 snaps, made only 7 critiques and there is no photographer's note. Have you read the site guidelines on critiques and notes?

As to this snap, the horizon is squint, the exposure is terrible, the girls feet are cut off and the tree top right is distracting. It is not a good picture.

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• eMBeer (1270)
• [2007-10-23 22:29]

Agreed with previous 2 critiques

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• iimanyus (1766)
• [2007-10-23 22:33]

Hi Mame.
Me also agreed with previous 2 critic.

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• yanm (7193)
• [2007-11-02 4:39]

Selamat sore mas.
Kenapa tidak di adjsut sedikit horisonnya ? Dan sayang kakinya tidak diikut sertakan. Padahal foto ini berpotensi untuk menjadi eye catching, karena warna yang kontrast antara orangnya dan BG. Daun diatas imo mending di clone out deh

Yan