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OLIVIA #1


OLIVIA #1
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Copyright: Yan Manarsar (yanm) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 557 W: 41 N: 849] (8440)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-21
Categories: Decisive Moment, Friends/Family
Camera: Nikon D-70s, Nikkor 18-70 AF-S DX ED f/3.5-4.5, Hoya 62 mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: A week in Simbolon Village.
Date Submitted: 2007-12-20 20:22
Viewed: 554
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another series about my niece a 2.5 years old cute girl. I stayed in their house for about a week when I tried to take a picture of villages in Samosir Island North Sumatra.

All this picture of here, will be a snapshot, without her posing. I do want it that way, never said I would take a picture as it will looks more natural. I just let her do her daily activities and sometimes take a picture when the light and pose and expression is good enough.

Therefore i hope what i thought good enough will be good enough for you.


All picture were shot in raw, with a slight adjustment on colour, saturation, brighness and contrast, and even b/w


yan
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Hello Yan!

Sweet and candid portrait . I like her smile and look here . the eyecontact is good and expression is very natural and charming. Darker background is excellent too.
Bravo!
RObert

hi yan, what a great shot, its is a candid shot with perfect relaxed feeling, the way i like a portrait to be, your work is great, i hope the holiday season is good for you, thanks my trek friend,
scott

Yan, Woooowwooo es una foto muy bella.
una mirada angelical.

Saludos,

Bayardo Mendez

Hello Yan
Actually, it’s a nice shot. Well captured and well seen.
Go on seriously and Thanks a lot for sharing. I find perfect your comment about this photo.
Thank a lot and have a good time
Saman SARRAF

Hi mas,

Ini foto koq apik banget ya . . Sangat tajam, dan expresi ponakan ini sangat pas serta terekam dengan baik . .
Sepertinya dia kagum difoto oleh anda . .
Bagaimana liburan ini, ada rencana?

Saya sedang di Bandung, dan hujan terus . .

Salam,
TJutjut

Yan,
Great crop (or framing). I LOVE the catch-light in the eyes and the sharpness of this photo. The shallow DOF is very appealing. You controlled the BG and used the available light very well.
I'd be proud of this one!
Scott

Great childhood expression. Nice portrait.

Hay Yan,
She is so lovely,
Beautiful picture,
Gr, Jacqueline

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1493 W: 23 N: 0] (11826)
  • [2007-12-20 23:41]

Great portrait...
Great expression...
Andro

She is a doll. Great texture, colors and expression. TFS

Hi Yan

Nice shots on this child.... love the natural expression of the kid... so sincere

Amri HMS

Hi Yan,

Lovely photo of a beautiful little girl.

Salam Yan,
Foto kamu ni bagus sekali penampilannya,balancing color dan light juga pass bagi pengamatan saya..ketajaman dan komposisinya juga baik sekali..bagi saya hasilnya bersih sekali..>takniah..>

Salam,
Anan

kebelakangan ya..;)

Hi Yan, very nice portrait with great light control on the skin.
Good offcenter comp.
She is very cute.
I like the tone of the image here.

Great work! Yan
Ps: Many thx for the crit in: "Christmas Lights 2".
pl

Hi Yan, Happy New Year 2008 !!!!!

Magnifico retrato con una iluminacion muy bien conseguida y excelente textura. Very well done.

regards,

Pako

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