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Sunday Morning


Sunday Morning
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Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1974 W: 85 N: 3265] (15264)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-06
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Nikon D100, AF-S VR Nikon 70-200mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/160 seconds
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-19 1:09
Viewed: 729
Points: 92
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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Sunday morning is the perfect time to go to this lake . . still fresh and smell forest . . Surrounded by tea plantation and woods at the other side of this lake . .

Little colorful boat is commonly used for transporting people to enjoy the lake . .
It's kind of tourist boat . .

Crop, add frame and resize . .

Thank you for viewing it . .

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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tanburi, Royaldevon, harpya, Silke, vandana2923, Marylou, milas, Hendrika, jusninasirun, JohnTulip, Refugee, Tomek, Ramdan, c_rapp, CallMeMaria has marked this note useful
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Hi Tjutjut !
nice symmetry with the rocks on the left and the boat on the right.
Well done. Best regards, Daniel

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2518 W: 0 N: 994] (13816)
  • [2008-02-19 1:49]

Hola Tju,
relajante imagen detalles hermosos,
presentación y pov,
saludos

Hi Tjutjut,

great colours from a distance! a nice shot & crop...so serene and calm Sunday morning.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Hi Tjutjut,
You are my neighbout today. It is my honour.
Masterful morning scene with two objects(boat and rocks) at golden points.
Well seen and well captured. TFS.
Selahattin E

good crop, well balanced and good depth
fine quality too, nice natural colours
regards
jo

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3301 W: 682 N: 2091] (16697)
  • [2008-02-19 3:11]

Very nice compo !
I like this peaceful atmosphere.

v

Excellent capture ! Very well composed, and the details, sharpness and lighting are superb.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hello Tjutjut,

A calm tranquil shot which makes the viewer relax!
I am impressed that you could get leading lines even on a lake! Superb composition and presentation!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)
Many thanks for your comments on 'From a different point of view!'

I think I would like a trip on this boat.
Lovely shot Tjutjut, great colours and composition.

Thanks
Gil.G

Hello my friend...

Beautiful composition and visual!
a Sunday beautiful, clean and color.
I like his picture, she is calm and soft.
Congratulations

Sérgio

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 264 N: 877] (8915)
  • [2008-02-19 3:57]

Hi Tjutjut ,
Excellent action shot. Love the colour and morning mood.
What a wonderful depthness and perspective.
Well done!
Lopa

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3116 W: 280 N: 6312] (24123)
  • [2008-02-19 5:12]

Beautifully composed and peaceful image - very nicely balanced
TFS
silke

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1906 W: 76 N: 0] (18995)
  • [2008-02-19 5:24]

Hi Tjutjut dear friend ;)
Fantastic shot, composition and atmosphere, TFS
All the best,
J ;)

Hi Tjutjut,
Beautiful composition,loveley photo.Congratulation.
Best regards,
Ralf

Hello Tjutjut :o)

What a nice place my dear friend ! It seems to be so quiet, full of serenity ... a place for dream :o) Good light, nice reflections and lovely frame, congrats !
Greetings
Marylou

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2167 W: 385 N: 2285] (24750)
  • [2008-02-19 8:17]

Merhaba myfriend Tjutjut...
Wonderful shot and pov..superb light and colors..bravo..selamlar

Hi My Friend Tjutjut,
What a peaceful lovely shot...
Nice colours and soft reflections. Tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

beautiful composition here Tjutjut, the small boat which is colorful is eyecatching turning out to be selective saturation of your compo,y two subject only made it sinply different. well seen and captured.
regards from Dubai..........andres

Beautiful composition here mate, lovely capture - the position of the boat is perfect and the lines of its wake work so well to draw the eye across the frame back and forth.
Very well done
Rew

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1314 W: 53 N: 1371] (6796)
  • [2008-02-19 11:49]

Top notch copmosition/cropping - love the quiet placid water. The mood established with the colors is beautiful. The vertical streaks look like a long exposure of rain drop, but of course that is not possible.

dan

Hi Tujutjut!
Great crop and placement of the objects. I like how the boat is really colorful and the surrounding water is gray, it really makes it pop
well done,
Shelby

hi tjutjut,good light and simple compositon, well done, thanks scott

Hello Tjutjut,

Looking at the title making me humming the song by Maroon 5. No rain here but a well balanced composition. Excellent sharpness and colorful details and very well framed shot too.

Regards,
Jusni

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1099 W: 428 N: 401] (11437)
  • [2008-02-19 23:07]

Hi Tjutjut
excellent, composition, light and DOF.
i like it.
tfs
Anna

hi Mas Tjutjut,
dimana nih ?
aku udah liat photo modelnya,
sebenarnya sudah bagus, karena mas tjutjut mengikuti 100% direction darai guru, kalau aku liat hasilnya, lumayan bagus kok, highlight di rambut dapet dan secara umum lightingnya baik, tapi... untuk muka masih terkesan flat, terlebih detail dari photo sebelah kiri yang terlalu gelap tanpa ada gradasi warna.

sebenarnya kalau mau lebih ditekuni akan dapat hasil yang baik, mungkin mas tjutjut harusnya melakukan sedikit perubahan pada lighting, sedikit dinamis dan berani aja mas, ikutin feeling mas tjutjut aja seperti kalau motret bunga atau binatang, itu baru hasil mas tjutjut, dan pada saat itu komentarnya akan berbeda. :)
Have a nice try mas...hehehe

Regards
Haldian

Hi Tjutjut,

Your note already paints a very pretty picture - - -.
Love the atmosphere in this picture and sure would not mind seeing some of the surroundings as well some time.
Very attractive composition and tasteful presentation.

TFS
Els
:)

Hello Tjutjut,
I like this composition, very balanced one.
The early morning mood is nicely captured. TFS
Vandana
later

Hello Tjutjut,

I like the colors bg pov dof excllent details very crisp well composed and captured photo excllent details very well presented photo

TFS Kyle
PT

Salam Bro,
Ini foto lama ya bro?..very fine sharpness and clear image..
Tepat pengambilan bro ini..view angle nya,light nya dan cantik color nya..
Takniah.

Salam,
Anan

Oh Tjutjut
How nice to show this beautifull photo.
The trenquility here.. the smooth water surface..
Excellent
I realy realy shall go once to Indonesia in the next coming 10 years
Tabe my friend
John

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11486)
  • [2008-02-20 10:51]

Hi Tjutjut
beautiful composition in a very nice light.
Gr Jos

Wonderful Tjutjut. A delightful misty background adds so much to the image. Nicely composed with good foreground colour and detail. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘City Park IX’

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1193 W: 39 N: 2135] (12575)
  • [2008-02-20 14:30]

Hi Tjutjut:)
Very good job, bit small but really pleasure for eyes:)
Regards - Tom

Excelent mood on the water,if I see it well there is a light reflection of hills(?),it all looks very calm and peaceful.
Kasih banyak dan sehat2 Tjut!
Salam.
jan

Very great colors! With the crop- I thought that this was a toy boat! But I was fooled. Awesome how the rock leads our eyes straight into the rest of the picture. I would have cloned out the small thing sticking out of the water on the right side past the boat.
Nice capture though.
TFS!

Hi dear friend,
beautiful crop for this morning shot.
Nice trace on the water.
Best wishes,
Ioana
ps: there is a little mistake in your title
:) soon

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1549 W: 143 N: 2154] (19358)
  • [2008-02-22 6:02]

Hello Tjujut, very well done composition, geat details and very good colors, well done, thanks!

Mario

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1933 W: 132 N: 3028] (16575)
  • [2008-02-23 0:56]

Believe it or not, I just ran out of green...hehehehe... but I still want to say something about this one...

This is very nice shot my dear, I like the peaceful and "quiet" mood here, I once took a shot like this, but from 10th floor of the hotel's windows... and it didn't look anything like this at all, this is perfect!

Cheers,
Sweety

:) ltr

Hi tjutjut,
This is so lovely shot. I liked how the boat created lines, a perspective lines drawing my eyes right to the boat. The rocks on the left hand side and its reflection was also added drama to this shot. Well done my friend.
Regards,
Ramdan.

Just a great view
TFS
Cynthia

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 936 W: 18 N: 1177] (6702)
  • [2008-02-26 16:48]

Love the colors of the boat just makes the entire pic more interesting. Great pov and wonderfully framed. TFS
Christan

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 530 W: 40 N: 693] (7271)
  • [2008-02-27 0:03]

wah nggak ngajak2 :)....keren banget pak :)

Hello Tjutjut.
a great composition and beautifull colors.
Regards Frans

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 771 W: 59 N: 1048] (6677)
  • [2008-03-05 2:34]

Hi Bang,

Nice view, good POV and well captured and presented.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

Hi Tjutjut,
This is really beautiful...the colorful boat stands out marvellously in that mirror-like water with those lovely reflections!!
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Celle ci aussi est techniquement très bonne, avec une daigonale artistique et des couleurs éclatantes très localisées. San s parler de la gestion de la lumière, excellente !
Cordialement,
Antoine.

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