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Beauty series_Riska part 2


Beauty series_Riska part 2
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Copyright: Ari Widodo (ariw) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 27 N: 162] (2125)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-23
Categories: Mood, Portrait
Camera: Olympus Evolt 510, Olympus Zuiko D 14-54 mm f/2,8-3,5, B+W 67mm UV_Haze MRC
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-03-19 4:40
Viewed: 339
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Still under natural lighting, Risko looked at the sky, shot wit a bit low angle

PP work : cropping, level adjustment, color balance, a bit gaussian blur, texting

Thank you for visiting and appreciate your comments and please do workshop so I can learn more for PP work

Regards,

Ari
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To gavindya: Salut dgn WSnyaariw 1 03-27 07:59
To Adri: Thank youariw 1 03-19 10:09
To yanm: He .. he ..ariw 1 03-19 10:07
To riverfriends: Thx for WSariw 1 03-19 10:05
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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 14 N: 944] (5626)
  • [2008-03-19 4:55]
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Hello Ari,
This is another beautiful portrait my friend! I love this picture because of the composition, the pose, her wonderful eyes and her teeth just visible......
Greetings from Holland,
Adri

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 545 W: 40 N: 671] (6686)
  • [2008-03-19 5:43]
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Serius di model neh ? LOL :D Cakep close up nya mas ari tapi kayaknya skin tonenya agak pucat deh :)

Hi Ari:
This is a real good attempt and good angle with nice tight crop for a close up with sharp details...
I would say color balace need a tad bit of change, and some sharpness may be may be adjusted in 'Smart Blur' tool.
I do have a WS for you if you dont mind...Thanks!
Very good work!
david

Hi mate
Without seeing the original version it's hard to say how well your PP worked. To me this doesn't quite seem to have the crisp sharpness that your camera should deliver, mostly around her eyes and lips. There seems to be pixellation or jpeg compression? It almost looks like a crop on a much bigger photo?
Besides that though, the composition, light, POV and your model's expression and mood are all fantastic, I hope I can achieve something like this!
Rew

Hello Ari!
Another great portrait of Riska!
She is very beautiful!
Good pooint of view!
Excellent done!
Best regards!
Lili
;)

hi Mas Ari,

Aku coba buat sedikit WS ya, sebenarnya hanya pada skin dan colors adjustment.
semoga suka. nanti kalau kita ketemu kita praktekin aja ya touch up untuk skin.

regards
Haldian

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