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Beauty Series - Riska 3


Beauty Series - Riska 3
Photo Information
Copyright: Ari Widodo (ariw) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 27 N: 162] (2125)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-23
Categories: Mood, Portrait
Camera: Olympus Evolt 510, Olympus Zuiko D 14-54 mm f/2,8-3,5, B+W 67mm UV_Haze MRC
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-05 1:23
Viewed: 469
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A 3rd photo from Beauty series - Riska

PP work : Cropping, soflight technique, combined with gaussian blur, level adjustment, burning, texting

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To rewshearer: Merci beaucoupariw 1 04-05 16:19
To tjutjut: calon pasien iyaariw 1 04-05 16:17
To yanm: Iya tuhariw 1 04-05 16:15
To gavindya: Hi hiariw 1 04-05 16:08
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Another great beauty shot here ... she's beautiful and you've captured her with dignity, softness, and a beautifully tight crop. The light is great and the PP work is nicely subtle.
Rew

Pk dokter . . Ini pasien koq canyik banget . . dan pengambilan anda sangat hebat . . saya suka pengaturan cahayanya . .
2 minggu lagi kita foto bareng ya . .

Salam,
Tjutjut

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 548 W: 40 N: 674] (6710)
  • [2008-04-05 6:55]
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mata yang dekat kamera agak soft deh mas ari. mending mata yang lebih jauh yang agak soft :)

Yan

Hi Mas Ari,
Nyambung nih, emangnya ini Pasien mas Ari ya, wah,.... harusnya saya juga jadi dokter aja deh kalau Pasiennya seperti ini :)
tapi mas... kok makeupnya aga keras ya ? atau memang disengaja ? kesannya seperti aga bengep2 aja nih mukanya (engga ada unsur pemaksaan kan waktu minta diphoto ? hahahah)

gimana model yang aku kasih liat udah dibuka blum ?
mas Tjutjut udah ga sabar tuh... mau photo2...

Rgd
Haldian

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