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Photo Information
Copyright: Ari Widodo (ariw) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 27 N: 162] (2125)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-12
Categories: Mood, Portrait
Camera: Olympus Evolt 510, Zuiko Digital 50-200 mm SWD / f2.8-3.5, B+W 67mm UV_Haze MRC
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-14 3:33
Viewed: 410
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Continuing the back to Nature Series, the model stood up on a rock, the background is a small water fall.

Weather was not too good, overcast and then rained, therefore I used external flash.

Maximized the zoom, maximized the aperture, spot metering, and a bit low angle position when shooting

PP work : level adjustment, color balance, resizing, texting

Hope you like it

Regards,

**AW
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Excellent Portrait photograph.

  • Great 
  • Usaf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 147 W: 77 N: 36] (901)
  • [2008-04-14 3:56]
  • [+]

Hi Ari Widodo
Its wonderful, perfect light on the face and the dark water fall in the background.
superb

TFS
Usaf

Beautiful.

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 548 W: 40 N: 674] (6710)
  • [2008-04-14 5:50]
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Ihhhhh kalau gue ikut kemaren yah :) modelnya cantik :)


Yan

Hi Ari!
Wonderful girl. Amazing beautiful girl. Nice face. Very funny pose.
Very good take.
Cheers!

Good shot..I like the composition and the angle. Good model too.TFS
Oam

Very cool shot Ari! The effect of the dim background and the fill-flash hitting your model is excellent indeed. Perhaps I would crop it more on the right and top to remove some of the unnecessary negative space, but this is a good shot overall!
Rew

WOW! The technique used with lighting really makes the model jump-out at you.

Maybe a tighter crop at the top but overall it's a stunning shot.

TFS.

Shane.

The use of the fill-in flash, especially with the darker background, works well, and you've created a well lit portrait. Composition could possibly be altered, to remove some space aorunf the model and make the model more the centre of attention.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

beautiful shot
TFS

Halo Ari,

Nyesel juga nggak ikutan kemarin . .
Bagaimana kalau diajakin ke Ujung Genteng? . . Disana yang lain hanya menikmati alam, dan kita yang moto-2 . .
Biayanya hanya 485.000 dari Jumat sampai Minggu, lengkap transport, akomodasi dan makan . .
Tertarik?

Salam,
Tjutjut

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  • gavindya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 930 W: 61 N: 140] (3833)
  • [2008-04-16 21:01]

hi Mas ari,
yang ini aga nge dall ya warna dan dimensinya.
mungkin karena aga jauh ?

aku mau ikut nih yang ke ujung genteng....
lumayan liburan, ikut aja yuuu, biar bareng2.
gimana >?

rgds
Haldian

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