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• rminkow (3602)
• [2008-04-16 7:53]

Hi Ari..nice shot of this young woman..the composition works very well.. your colors and light are perfect.

Roger

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• Ananfoto (0)
• [2008-04-16 8:05]

Asalamualaikum Bro,
Bro memang mempunyai kemahiran dalam portraiture..Saya kagum sekali dengan hasil kerja 2 bro nie..
You are a talented guy , most of your work shows great beauty.Perfect light, and outstanding composition.Great job my friend.

Salam,
Anan

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• biazberdy (2192)
• [2008-04-16 8:20]

Hello Ari:) You are living in a beautifulplace and shooting beautiful women:))
Like Your photos but to my mind the background is too blurred I would love to be able to dstinguish more details in the background escpecially because it so picturesque

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• athlon (424)
• [2008-04-16 8:33]

Nice Photo, Nice colors, espacially the location, you have it is really very beautiful point.

A little bit face is too lift, check it, because your shot is from the down side. But accept of all it is a great photo.

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• Adri (4093)
• [2008-04-16 9:01]

Hello Ari,
Lovely picture of a lovely woman!
Great colours and light.
Very good POV; well done!
Greetings from Holland,
Adri

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• yanm (6334)
• [2008-04-16 10:10]

warna bajunya membuat modelnya stand out Mas ari. Kayaknya masih bisa ditambah sedikit highlight

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• korbee (6669)
• [2008-04-16 11:30]

Wonderful model,posing in a very stylisch dress with a superb background.
Bagus dan enak Ari.
jan

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• rewshearer (13366)
• [2008-04-16 11:53]

Love this one Ari - the light is once again perfect, this is a standard shoe-mounted flash? Do you use any diffuser?

The waterfall is far better defined now as a background, I think it works beautifully this time. The crop is great and the pose is excellent!

Rew

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• ShaneO (108)
• [2008-04-16 15:46]

Hello Ari,

The lighting on this one is even better than before and a great POV.

There are a couple of very bright "dots" on the models neck that are distracting and I'm not sure how that would have happened?

The position of your model to the waterfall is excellent and makes for a very pleasing overall image.

Regards,
Shane.

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• gavindya (4100)
• [2008-04-16 21:21]

mas ari untuk yang ini kalau menurut aku aga ander ya, jadinya dibagian badan terutama tangan aga terkesan flat.
highlight di kaki ok tuh tipis tapi dimensinya dapet.
untuk kepala dan muka sama sekali ga ada masalah.
tfs

Rgds
Haldian
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• milas (20518)
• [2008-04-17 6:26]

Merhaba myfriend Ari. ...
Beautiful composition with great shot. The color are very great. Excellent photo. Well done
Regards
Selamlar

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• tjutjut (13545)
• [2008-06-11 9:57]
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Halo Ari,

Sensual banget nih pengambilan dari sudut bawah seperti ini . .
Apakah ada model nanti foto di Bromo?
Pasti menyenangkan bisa moto bareng dengan teman-2 yang suka hobi sama

Salam,
Tjutjut