For Rew and Haldian

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• JohnTulip (36194)
• [2008-05-22 4:33]

Wow
Well Tjutjut .. this is REALY what I call a professional photo !
I do not know enough of Rew ' portraits( will check out in due time.. but I know that Hallidan is a photographer of this excellent standard!

Respectfull greetings

John

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• spacebar (974)
• [2008-05-22 4:39]

Amazing shot, perfect conduction of the model and of her eye contact...
You're right: all of us have much to learn from rew and haldian, but this one already shows the good hand for model portraiting!
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

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• Marylou (11962)
• [2008-05-22 4:43]

Hello Tjutjut :)

We are nieghbours today :) it's a particular felling to think we are rather near in this virtual world :o)
Excellent portrait you did there ! Wow ! I'm very impressed by the quality ... position, colours, sharpness ... everythin is perfect, congrats :o)

Have a nice day my dear friend and take care

Marylou ;)

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• shelbeesmom (33420)
• [2008-05-22 4:53]

Oh baby, oooo lala! Very racy Tjutjut! I don't know if Rew can handle it! HAHA! Very good work here, very provacative!
B-)
Linda

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• Silke (23856)
• [2008-05-22 4:53]

VERY nice composition! And the mood is truly fabulous
Great image
TFS
silke

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• japiey (8724)
• [2008-05-22 5:07]

Hi Tjutjut,

Perfect image for our friends...
Great shot...well done.
All the best.

jp

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• chrisJ (28048)
• [2008-05-22 5:07]

Hi Tjutjut

A nice tribute to rew who consistently posts good images of attractive female models. This is a superb imitation, & very flattering. Tfs!

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• mesquens1 (6163)
• [2008-05-22 5:13]

Hi Tjutjut,
Marvelous portrait. The arm as frame is fine.
Very beautiful model.
Cheers
Raimundo

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• lavan (2250)
• [2008-05-22 5:17]

nice composition
good colors
well done

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• Teresat (4296)
• [2008-05-22 5:22]

Bom Dia Tjutjut

You have the cacth the mood. Great and lovely tribute to health mind. Congratulations.

My regards

Teresat

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• Danert (3523)
• [2008-05-22 5:45]

Hi Tjutjut,
A powerfull portrait . The pose is well choosen and the model is posing like a pro . To me,
the light is perfect and the background is not disturbing . Your model is a beautifull young lady and that helps too .
Daniel

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• izmirli (15363)
• [2008-05-22 5:51]

merhaba dear tjutjut
excellent portrait picture and composition.excellent top model.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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• Adri (5480)
• [2008-05-22 5:55]

Hi Tjutjut,
A GREAT portrait!!
Wonderful pose.
I like her eyes and her open lips.
This photograph has almost an erotic irradiation; well done!
Greetings from Netherland,
Adri

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• Jong (2612)
• [2008-05-22 7:00]

wowww what a pose, look at the eyes and red lips, impressive portrait. lovely colours and i like the mood here. tfs, Tjutjut

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• rminkow (5796)
• [2008-05-22 7:04]

Hi Tjutjut..this is a nice shot...nicely composed..great light and tones..nice job.

Roger

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• kickback (8788)
• [2008-05-22 7:18]

hi tjutjut, nice shot, beautiful captured woman who is just stunning, i like the pose,
tfs,
scott

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• trekks (8847)
• [2008-05-22 7:45]

hi Tjutjut

A great start into portrait work and you are brave to shoot a model. Good exposure and light condition. Perhaps the model's face expression can be a little less stiff.

tfs, bill

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• MagdalenaN (4936)
• [2008-05-22 8:04]

Hello Tjutjut
wonderful portrait of this beautiful face, great DOf and sharpness, good work
rgds
Magda

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• KK-Lenser (204)
• [2008-05-22 8:24]

Asalamualaikum Bro Tjutjut,
Ni abah KK-Lenser yang kasi komentar.Percubaan portrait shot bro ni sangat memberi kasan dan cabaran pada pengemar2 foto portrait.Bagi saya bro ini dah cukup bagus,tindakan bro dengan menggunakan close up shot dan meletakkan tangan model ini pada kepala nya sebagai framing membuatkan foto ini cantik.Tentang skin tones its really good bro,well balance with the light...and sharpness absolutely perfect.
wonderful done bro.

KK-Lenser

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• Janone (17892)
• [2008-05-22 8:55]

Excellent pose of this beautiful lady, tjutjut.
One thing, Her face is a bit too sharp, in accordance to her arm, better the otherway around.
But ehh.. lovely looking at her, thanks for showing.
Best regards from Jan

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• vandana2923 (22118)
• [2008-05-22 11:04]

Hello Tjutjut,
Really pro work.
Beautiful light, and skin tones. TSF
Vandana

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• kfreud (2471)
• [2008-05-22 13:42]

excellent work
Karl

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• Tomek (11802)
• [2008-05-22 14:05]

Simply beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TFS - this is great portrait of such a pretty girl.
Tom:)

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• yamataraja (5685)
• [2008-05-22 14:09]

Hello Tjutjut
I think that portrait is very good and I just can't find anything to improve it. The skin color and tecture are very natural, the faming done very artistically. I wouldn't change anything.
Bravo
Serge

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• witek1 (1046)
• [2008-05-22 14:57]

Rzadko pojawiaja sie tego typu portrety. Ta kompozycja z reka i zdziwieniu na twarzy stwarza wrazenie uchwycenia chwili ulotnej.
Pozdrawiam Witek

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• juyona (13152)
• [2008-05-22 16:08]

WOOW,
buen retrato,
excelente toque sensual :))
contacto visual y pose,
saludos Tju.

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• Kiwis (12321)
• [2008-05-22 16:15]

Hi Tjutjut,
Excellent portrait you have done! It's superb with an excellent soft light. Very well done. Thanks
Regards
Diane

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• lilimih33 (13760)
• [2008-05-22 16:33]

Hello Tjutjut!
Nice colours and perfect detail!
Lovely portrait and interesting perspective!
Best regards!
Lili

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• Romeu (1407)
• [2008-05-22 17:32]

Hi Tjutjut,

amazing portrait! You do every thing in great style!

Congratulations my friend.
TLS,
Romeu

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• kross1 (2592)
• [2008-05-22 22:15]

Hi Tjutjut,
WOW!!! What an amazing portrait. The focus is perfect and the quality of the shot is excellent. Her eyes are sharp and I like the way her arm is positioned, like a frame. Well done Tjutjut.
Regards,
Kevin

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• Urfaust (10419)
• [2008-05-23 0:11]

ciao Tjutjut
a beuaty in every sense.. effective capture.. wonderful portrait
thanks
ciao Marco

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• gavindya (3831)
• [2008-05-23 0:31]

I Really proud of you my son... :)
Great work !
just need a bit sharp and contras for dimension :)


Rgds
Haldian

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• manujmehta (4977)
• [2008-05-23 0:41]

hello Tjutjut
How are you friend?
nice portrait

wonderful composition
good lighting
yah after reading your notes i can say you are almost there what we call a professional photography with models. Rew must be happy to see that.

good work my friend

regards
:)soon

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• tsesler (4457)
• [2008-05-23 1:39]

Hi Tjutjut,
it is a great portrait work,
compo, sharpnes and clarity, colours....
absolutely perfect,
welldone my friend and tfs,
regards,
Taner
:) tomorrow

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• Jens (4623)
• [2008-05-23 2:59]

Hi Tjutjut
Great shot my friend, perfect light perfect focus, and very well composed - a great job.
Compliments
Jens.

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• PakoJones (3479)
• [2008-05-23 3:09]

Hello Tjutjut,

Precioso retrato con esa bella modelo, muy buenos detalles y excelente iluminación. Muy buen trabajo.

Regards,

Pako

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• devylla (2507)
• [2008-05-23 4:59]

Woooowwww,
Exelent mood.
Exelent expresion.She is very sexy.
Exelent portrait.
Love the perspective.


Sabina

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• norenastramus (21079)
• [2008-05-23 9:34]

Hi Tjutjut,
Great portrait and very beautiful pose.
Lovely colours and details.Beautiful gift.
Well done my friend.TFS
Greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

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• hay_kes (36963)
• [2008-05-23 12:28]

Hi Tjutjut,
What a wonderful portrait.Well compo.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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• bucanas (10120)
• [2008-05-23 13:14]

Hi bTjutjut,
Beautiful portrait,beautiful model,congratulation.
Best regards,
Ralf

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• GreenBaron (38599)
• [2008-05-23 14:31]

Hi Tjutjut,
What to add to the other critiques. My compliment for sucgh a wonderful portrait. Particular the eyes are so wondeful captured. Well done my friend!
Hans

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• rewshearer (15527)
• [2008-05-23 15:35]
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It's a very good portrait Tjutjut, nice work. Very nice light and comp, a great pose from your model, I like the fact that you have left the skin texture natural.

The composition is unusual I think, but it works - I've included a workshop outlining some of the "rules" of portrait composition. Your photo just shows how successfully rules can be broken!

Rew

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• Beger (15117)
• [2008-05-23 17:44]

Hi Tjutjut,
You show us all your talent with this one, dear friend! I agree totally with the concert of praises( all deserved) and just tell that
this portrait is very well done! Great lines in the composition using the angle of her arms for framing the image. Excellent eye contact, colors and light. My compliments! |Annie

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• MLINES (6565)
• [2008-05-23 18:39]

Hi Tjutjut, This is a wonderful glamour photo, one of the first i ihave seen in your gallery. The model is lovely of course, but your arrangement is first class. The mouth deserves a special mention. TFS. Murray.

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• yanm (6632)
• [2008-05-23 20:33]

wah cantik sekali pak. available lightnya keren. nggak ngajak2 nih ::P

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• wieyos (6077)
• [2008-05-23 21:54]

Hi Tjut,

pose yang sangat menawan kayak modelnya juga....:).

tona kulit yang bagus dan detail yang menggiurkan. cuma barangkali karena terlalu detail sehingga kelihatan seperti kesan kumis pada wanita ini. cuma opini saya. saya sendiri belum berani mencoba genre begini, koq...:)

over all, modelling portrait yang sangat bagus.

TFS & Selamat berhujung minggu.
Regards
Agoes

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• jagroopsingh (1264)
• [2008-05-24 1:09]

hello dear tjutjut

this is a really wonderful portrait for wonderful photographers; Rew and Haldian
very nice pose of your model
good lighting

very proffesional

tfs
jagroopsingh :D

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• moli (7065)
• [2008-05-24 1:18]

Hello Tjutjut.
Absolutelly fantastic portrait, model, pose and great capture in one beautiful composition. Great inspiration and dedication as well.
They will be proud of you.
I am.
Congratulations.
Janek Kloss

:) be back

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• coed1992 (4280)
• [2008-05-24 2:08]

well captured portrait Tjutjut where the highlights and shadows are well balanced.In some tips, you have to give some time on ppworks, like cloning out the small pimples that will make her skin more flawless, the setting of white balance is important too.Normally you can set it to Auto or Portrait mode if you have it to have a natural skin tone. But for me this one came out perfect pose and eyecontact is there.well captured my friend.a succesfull portrait image.
regards.....................andres

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• Refugee (24931)
• [2008-05-24 2:55]

An excellent portrait Tjutjut. Lovely natural skin tones and a godo pose. TFS.
David

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• wilth (1426)
• [2008-05-24 5:51]

Extraordinary shot, lighting, handling of the skin and skin tones and POV very nicely done.
Compelling pose and great presentation.
Thanks for the great view,
Wilt

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• korbee (8411)
• [2008-05-24 6:23]

Overhere something very unusual from Tjut,to make new things is not alway very easy,but the way you have succeeded is extraordinairy.
Orang ini,cintik dan manis.....
Bagus composisi pak!
jan

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• EOSF1 (17505)
• [2008-05-24 6:34]

Hello Tjutjut, well done on this great portrait, good tight crop, nice model and nice pose. Great composition and very good technique! Thanks!

Mario

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• Mujahid-Awais (3920)
• [2008-05-24 22:01]

Beautiful portrait of the beauty.

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• masuria (444)
• [2008-05-25 1:10]

very good portrait shot

regards,
yogesh

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• ioana_tm (12549)
• [2008-05-25 2:55]

Hi dear friend,
wonderful pose and dedication.
Great expression on her face.
Best wishes,
Ioana
:) soon

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• boomcat (10927)
• [2008-05-27 0:27]

wah bro Tjutjut.. anda suda dapat menguasai potret shot ini.. bagus sekali pengambilannya bro.. aku suka komposisinya yg menarik dan cantik.. lebih lagi model bro ini memang suda tau posing sedia..

sexy look.. well done.. aku ne jarang komen model perempuan tapi for you bro aku komen.. jgn sexy terlampau dah la..

regards, terry

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• gnada (13627)
• [2008-05-27 6:10]

Hi Tjutjut...
It's really nice portrait for your friend...
Very nice pose and really a very good shot!
Beautiful color and contrast...
Well done,
George

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• mvdisco (17757)
• [2008-05-28 19:58]

Hi Tjutjut,
Excellent portrait of this beautiful women, beautiful colours and nice POV. and catch,
very well done.
Michel

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• starky (2754)
• [2008-06-02 22:58]

Hi Tjutjut.Wonderfu picture and beautiful model.
Best regards, Bosko.

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• jusninasirun (7942)
• [2008-06-15 8:41]

Hello Tjutjut. You have excellent mentors here in TL. The image is stunning in natural skin tone. Nice pose and thanks for sharing. Best regards. Jusni

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• carifuna07 (604)
• [2008-07-22 0:34]

HI!
Like very much this photo, it's true that the model is very beautiful! Love the pose and expression!
Very well done!
TFS
Carine

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• Nesa (189)
• [2008-07-25 22:49]
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• Jeweller (198)
• [2008-08-07 18:55]
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Very nice portrait shot. Beautiful model. I find the photo to be just a little dark but it's still quite aceptable. I hope you don't mind but I did a workshop.

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• Regiomontana (2227)
• [2008-08-14 23:50]

I have enjoyed your gallery a lot, and I don´t know how I missed this photo. Besides the beauty of the girl, and the excellent lighting, texture, colors, her pose is very original. TFS

Lorena