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Cluster of tomato


Cluster of tomato
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Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2003 W: 88 N: 3276] (15091)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-07
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 5D, Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/40 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-07 1:01
Viewed: 424
Points: 102
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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Bought some fruits this morning, and stop at vegetable area in the shop . . and found this cluster of tomato . . it's imported . . small size of tomatoes, as compare the local one are bigger . .
But this one is more expensive . .

Before juicing it, I arrange on white plate and capture it . .

Ambient light at veranda . . no other peripherals to take this shot . .

No crop, resize . .

Thank you for viewing it . .

Cheers,
TJutjut

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1154 W: 15 N: 597] (10356)
  • [2008-06-07 1:09]

Perfect natural colors and detail!! A very tasty picture once again :) TFS and have a great weekend!

Hi my friend...
Very good colors and composition...
Have a nice day...
Andro

ciao Tjutjut..
nice and effective!! i really like the composition with natural colours.. and good details!! well done!
ciao Marco

hello Tjutjut
how are you dear?
after reading you note i found out that these are tomatoes. earlier i thought that they must be some kind of Indian cherrys.
A sharp shot of lovely colourful object.
a nice idea of white plate to highlight the subject
nice lighting

regards
MAnuj Mehta

Asalamualaikum Bro,
How are you bro?...Bagaimana teman2 yang lain disana?Haldy ada sms saya kasi tau dia sibuk sangat kebelakangan ini.Dia buat solo exhibition untuk artphoto..kirim salam dengan dia ya bro.
Bagaimana acara bro? Ikut bareng ma Haldy tak?..

Oya tentang foto ni memang standout detail dan color nya..saya senang sekali dengan hasilkerja bro ini.well done!

CM

Hello Tjutjut,

You are an experienced photographer and understand the importance of adding some interesting water droplets to your subject. Their light and reflection also help to bring out the round depth of the fruit.
A lovely, colourful composition!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)
Many thanks for your warm comments on Ramblig Rose.

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 0 N: 155] (1411)
  • [2008-06-07 3:15]

Hi Tjutjut,

you are unstop bull! Always a beutiful shot! This one has agreat compo and is very original.

Congratulations my friend,
Romeu

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 0 N: 284] (1313)
  • [2008-06-07 3:37]

Hello Tjutjut,
a very clever and excellent idea. Great and simple. Very clear nd crispy. Nice position and very creative of your.
Terima kasih diatas respond Tjutjut dengan gambar saya. Saya mendapat idea yg baik dari Tjutjut. WS tuan pun saya menerima ideanya...menarik.
Sekali lagi TQ and I shall see the ideas keep on coming. Thanks.

helo dear tjutjut

lovely closeup of imported tomatos...
good shallow depth of field
nice pov and lighting

tfs
js

Tjutjut,
This is a mighty fine studio shot of the tomatoes. Superb lighting, the water drops enhance the image. Best regards, Danilo

Hi Tjutjut,
Beautiful composition,good composition.
Best regards,
Ralf

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3366 W: 284 N: 6438] (23896)
  • [2008-06-07 5:50]

Very fine macro of one of my favourite "fruits" -- I used to grow these in my garden
Great details, fine composition
TFS
silke

perfect use of ambient light here Tjutjut, well captured sharp and vivid natural colors.a good product photography here. TFS.
regards.........andres

really cute shot simple yet very beautiful. very nice arrangement

tfs
cris(",)

I really like this shot of the tomatoes all on their stems! Very creative and imaginative. I like the subtle variation in the different shades. Nice simple background too.

Looks delicious! What time is lunch? :D

Lisa

Well folks... From a photographic point of view there's not a lot going for this picture...
1. For a still life such as this everything should be in FOCUS.. However with a 5.6 aperture only the stem of the cluster is truely in focus, none of the tomatoes (subject) are..
2. Just plonking them on a white plate doesn't do any justice to this image. Either have the whole plate - or none!!
The light's worked out well here, just a pity Tjutjut that you haven't thought about using a tripod (better DOF) or thought a little harder about the composition.
Seriously, for someone with so many photos on TL you should be posting far better images than this. Such as your previous shot - far better (anti tumour)
Regards
David

Hi Tjutjut,
Very beautiful close up vith excellent colours and graphism.Well compo.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Hello Tjutjut,
Hey, soon I'll have such clusters on my tomato plants.
Fresh looking, eatable view.
I like the composition. TFS
Vandana

hi Tjutjut

I can imagine the sharpness to be much better if a tripod is used for this macro, but at 1/40 you have produced a good macro using natural light and BG. The natural bunch is a good subject for this macro.

tfs, bill

Hi Tjutjut,
Very fantastic tomato shot...
Beautiful colours and good details.
I like it.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1263 W: 46 N: 1314] (6391)
  • [2008-06-07 13:43]

Like the changing colors from left to right of the image. Moisture is a good touch too. So you buy them for juice. My major use is cut up in a salad. Interesting.

Dan

Hello Tjutjut. Very good shot in full frame utilizing natural ambiance brilliantly. Seven is a good number in bright orange colors with with contrasting green. Well captured in rich freshness and clarity. Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

Hello Tjutjut :o)

Another beautiful shot my dear friend ! Very refreshing one :o) Nice details and well presented as usual, congrats !
Hope everything is fine for you and your family.
Bisous

Marylou

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 38 N: 2058] (11858)
  • [2008-06-07 15:33]

Very tasteful, aromatic and nice in geometry image.
I like it - it look tempting and tasty:)
Greetings - Tom

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1088 W: 64 N: 1435] (5872)
  • [2008-06-07 16:30]

Hi Tjutjut,
Great presentation. I don't know if tomates appears like that on the nature of if it is work of yours, and I don't care. It is a great presentation in colour in composition and in idea.
Very well done.
mb

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1052 W: 56 N: 685] (11117)
  • [2008-06-07 23:46]

Hi Tjutjut,
what a simple and wonderful composition.Great contrast bvetween colours.TFS.Necla.

Hi Tjutjut,
yummmmmmmmy,
they look delicious,
i know them, and i always prefer to buy those little ones, because they are really delicious,
perfect compo with superb clarity and sharpnes,
welldone and tfs,
regards,
Taner
:) tomorrow

We grow this sweet tomatoes in the Philippines inside the big green house. It is hydroponically grown fruit my friend. Great clear shot.
Dennis

Very nice still life composition Tjutjut! Could be a little more sharper for me, but still a good experiment here of these "maters"..
B-)
Linda

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1516 W: 1 N: 131] (11785)
  • [2008-06-08 8:16]

lovely macro perfect colours

Hello Tjutjut
Lovely composition, POV and lights.
Thanks!
Greetings,

John

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1606 W: 0 N: 173] (12337)
  • [2008-06-08 16:36]

Hi Tjutjut,
The colors are really natural. Perfect composition and clarity. Very well done. Thanks
Regards
Diane

Hi Tjutjut
Excellent compo and deatils. Great idea. I like this patatos very much
Best wishes
Melany

hi tjutjut, awesome colors and details, very sharp, nice work,
tfs,
scott

Una estupenda imagen Tjutjut.
Original por su simetría y colorido.
Buena vista.
Saludos, JL.

Hello Dear Tjut
simply stunning capture.
man how do you think of these super shots???

wHAT DO YOU EAT???? :-)

mARVELLOUS PRESENTATION AND THE LIGHT IS TOO GOOD.
WHITE AND RED MAKE A CLASSIC COMBO.
gREAT CAPTURE
TFS

SMILEY SOON

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5243 W: 181 N: 6224] (32841)
  • [2008-06-10 5:41]

Hello Tjutjut


Beautiful macro shot of this tomatoes!
I find them very beautiful,
a perfect macro!
An excellent one visual and sharp very good!
I like his simplicity in this plate.
Congratulations my friend...

Sérgio

An excellent composition Tjutjut, natural colours and fine detail. TFS,
David

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1576 W: 118 N: 3601] (14417)
  • [2008-06-11 3:45]

Hello Tjutjut
Very nice, crisp shot.. the water drops make it look so fresh.. Love how you have propped them on your plate

Tricia

Hi Tjut,

a perfect cluster of tomatoes, beautifully captured under macro.

freshness is vivid; and much appreciate for sharing before you juice them....:)

TFS
Regards
Agoes

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2465 W: 0 N: 876] (13220)
  • [2008-06-12 9:31]

Hola amigo,
muy original esta presentación,
buen pov y color,
hermoso macro.
saludos Tju

Hi Tjutjut,
Very sharp image and excellent lighting. I never thought tomatoes look as delicious as this. Well captured and presented. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hi Tjutjut,
Vivid striking color and excellently crisp detials to the water drops on the delicious tomatoes.
Regards, Tom

Hello my friend

A ncie fresh sharp capture here, good lighting and superb detail. I hope you are keeping well

TFS regards Helen

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1456 W: 126 N: 2045] (17633)
  • [2008-06-19 8:14]

Hello Tjutjut! Another great 'beauty shot' with those tomatoes! You're really good, you should do some advertising photos! Thanks!

Mario

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2014 W: 136 N: 3063] (16571)
  • [2008-06-21 21:34]

Hello my dear friend,

Lovely shot and it look so delicious due to the contrast and of cos the water drops... fantastic work, great lighting and composition, very well present! :D


Have a great weekend,

Cheers,
Sweety

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1025 W: 17 N: 1190] (6624)
  • [2008-06-28 22:30]

Love tomatoes, great picture nice details and wonderful color. TFS
Christan

heheh i have it here;))

It grows here i eat it everyday i love it;))

Its very good and sweet ..these are sicilian tomatos!
TFS

Kisses from ItalY!

ANIA

Oh you use them for juice - must say I never used tomatoes for that. I just cut them in half, add a tiny bit of seasalt and just eat them like that.
Lovely fruit Tjutjut, hope you enjoyed the tomato juice.

TFS
Els

It looks so easy and simple,but it is the way you present it,making it special.
Bagus Pak!
jan

Dimana Yan Manarsar?????long time no see!

I love this photo. Reminds me that there's so much beauty in everyday things, you just have to keep your eyes open. I love the colors against the white plate, and the simple lines. :) Che Bella :)

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 960 W: 0 N: 506] (6479)
  • [2008-09-10 15:48]

Hello Tjutjut !
That´s really curious and pleasant for watching it! Bravo!
Um abraço, parabéns!
Brazilian Greetings to you and to the Indonesian people!
From Recife, Nivaldo

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