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Julie 2


Julie 2
Photo Information
Copyright: haldian arsenta (gavindya) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 916 W: 58 N: 138] (3958)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-12
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon Eos 1 Ds Mark II
Exposure: f/11, 1/80 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-16 7:22
Viewed: 459
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Julie 2
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Artwork

2nd photo from Julie series, I hope you like it.
any comment and critique are welcome :)

regards
Haldian
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Hello,

BEAUTIFUL

Jules

i like this version better haldian :)
the slight upward tilt of her face givs her eye more life
nice symetry too :)

koh

very nice shot

cris(",)

Hello dear Haldian
wonderful portrait, perfect clearity, excellent pose and background, wonderful skin texture, perfect work my friend
bravo
Magda

Asalamualaikum Haldy,
Ya dek abang suka banget pose yang ini,tapi abang nampak macam keletihan aje model adek ni..hehe.

Nak tanya dikit nih..Kalau pakai satu soft box lighting dengan max power 400watts dan satu lagi pakai umbrella menggunakan flash light,bisa ga menghasilkan portrait yang baik?...berapa jarak jauh untuk simpan soft-box lighting dari model nya? Bagaimana set-up nya dek,abang cuman bru ada 2 benda ni..? Kasi tips ya!

CM

Kirim salam dengan keluarga adek disana ya..

hello dear Haldian

amazing portrait
highly professional
great lighting
nice skin texture

very well done dear!
tfs
js

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  • chats (4)
  • [2008-06-21 10:34]

good expression captured on julie's face....i like this one better than the other one...nice job

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  • S-moon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 255 W: 29 N: 240] (1559)
  • [2008-07-03 10:21]

Hi Haldian,

Beautiful portret. Nice pose and the lighting looks great! Good POV. Well done!

TFS Greetings Simone

I missed this! I must have been in the Philippines when you posted it.

I do like this. I love Julie's look, she has beautiful strong features - eyes, lips, nose, eyebrows, and the shape of her face. Your light here is good with the highlights from left and right. There's much to learn for me here: I recently bought studio strobes and I'm practicing now how to get the best out of them.

Thank you as always for the inspiration!

Rew

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