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Julie 3


Julie 3
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Copyright: haldian arsenta (gavindya) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 916 W: 58 N: 138] (3958)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-12
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon Eos 1 Ds Mark II
Exposure: f/11, 1/80 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-17 18:55
Viewed: 642
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Julie 3
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Artwork

Still Julie,
She's try to explore her expression and pose.
I hope you like it.

Any comment and critique are welcome

Best regards
Haldian
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  • Great 
  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 105 W: 2 N: 97] (914)
  • [2008-06-17 22:36]

Very nice composition I like how you position your model while balancing the light, I think black BG is better for this one.

TFS,

Buddy

Salaam haldian
another wonderful portrait
expressions are in their best as if she is not happy with whatever has happened.
Your artwork is conveyd sucessufly.

thanks for sharing
Manuj Mehta
:)Soon

Salam Haldy,
Tak perlu abang komen nih,cuman abang nak perhatikan sahaja hasil kerja adek ni..abang tengok bagaimana hasil lighting yang di apply ke model ni...abang study lah ni...hehehe..Lighting dan shadow nya juga bagus..

All the best dek.

CM

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  • ariw Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 27 N: 162] (2126)
  • [2008-06-18 9:53]

Hello Aldhy apa kabar ? Lama nih kita nggak ngupi2. Lighting so pasti okay, ekspresi model juga okay, cuman sayang nih rambutnya nutupin mata kirinya.

BTW, ada hunting ke bromo tg 26-30 juli, aku ngajakin mas tjutjut juga, gimana, ikutan yuk ?

Salam,

Ari

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11486)
  • [2008-06-23 10:35]

Hi Haldian
Very good studio work.
Gr Jos

Hello friend
wow, great shot of Julie, her skin look like statue, great pose, great nude photo, delicate and sensitive, bravo
Magda

Salam Bro

Satu persembahan yang baik dan memang mempunyai cerita di sebalik foto ini... Congrats and TFS

Amri HMS

Hi Haldian,
You placed the model well on very right side,
with no confusing points elswhere. It's good indeed.
Your all portraits are outstanding. I added you to my favorites, if you don't mind. Cheers, Ivan

Sudah lama tak sua . .
Cuma ada SMS aja . .
Kapan kita ketemu?
Ari sdh balik dari Bromo . .
Mukanya Yulie koq agak judes gini ya? padahal anaknya cantik lho . .
apakah memang diminta seperti ini?

Salam,
TJutjut

Julie's gorgeous. Your light and colour treatment here are great - much to learn for me, still!
Rew

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