Rahel

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• marcocig (3143)
• [2008-10-05 6:27]
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Hi Kesha,

I'm quite astonished thAT nobody gave a critique to this shot, here is more and more a chatting room more than a site for photographer..well, ok.
I love this shot cause of her pose, for the details of her and of the stairs on the FG and I love also the great contrast gave by the depth of the BG, dark but not too much, enough to create the feeling of a mysterious depth behind.
well a great shot.

M

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• cjjc_jules (3545)
• [2008-10-05 6:44]
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i agree with marco, this is a very good photos, good lighting, great detail and sharpness, excellent tone, great practice of rules of third. tfs-jon

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• KBE (63)
• [2008-10-05 6:49]
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Hi Kesha
I agree with marcocig that her pose details FG and dark BG is loveable. This is a beautiful shot of beautiful model with an interesting pose ur idea for grenish BG is good but i was working on its WS so i couldn't post my comment early so here its now hope u'll like it :)
TFS
JZM

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• captive-light (628)
• [2008-10-05 7:47]
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Yes, this one works pretty well and deserves more attention then it's had. Lighting is excellent, making her stand out well from the background, and you can make so many stories around this image. The one thing that makes me uncomfortable with this image is her expression, to me she has THAT look that models reserve for the camera and which they are sure makes them look sexy, she might have looked better trying to look wistful or slight shy smile as opposed to the typical model sexy pout... but that's just my personal oppinion.

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• Serabi (1547)
• [2008-10-05 7:47]
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Good picture, although suggestive and somewhat provocative. Exposure is perfect and I like the setting very much. Good job!

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• tjutjut (15264)
• [2008-10-07 1:09]
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Hi Rusma,

Ini foto di MT Haryono ya?
Cantik modelnya . .
Kapan2 ajak ya . .

Salam,
Tjutjut

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• yanm (7239)
• [2008-10-08 22:10]
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keren euy. nit mungkin sedikit separator dibagian kepala dari b/g

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• trekks (9964)
• [2008-10-09 2:00]
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hello Kesha

I do not know how Yanm would skip shooting this lovely model, but she looks great for the camera. I find the pose very sexy although the legs are placed in such a strange kinky position at the ankle.

Perhaps I find the left side of her head and shoulder/arm a bit distracted by the background, so shifting slightly could overcome that, while the right side is fine with the darker BG, because of light from that direction. Too much empty space at the left, perhaps to my liking, which can be cropped.

I find the face expression sexy and good. Overall, a great portrait shot. tfs

bill

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• leeloo (2491)
• [2008-10-11 8:29]

Dear Kesha Andrea!
Amazing Rahel!
Wonderful scene.
Interesting scenery.
Nice capture.
Beautiful picture.
TFS!