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I'm free ... guy on the beach


I'm free ... guy on the beach
Photo Information
Copyright: Nino di Bari (ndb1958) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 364 W: 0 N: 44] (2036)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-07-27 23:58
Viewed: 627
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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cropping
saturation
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Hi Nino,
Nice shot. Surfers are always good to symbolize hot summer days.
Nice composition. I like where you put the surfer and have him walking into the frame. There's the issue of that branch all alone on the left side, I would recommend cloning it out as it seems out of place (ehh...ehh...it's not exactly your "bell pepper"). I like the division of colors you got with sand, waves, and sky. If you want, you should experiment with cutting out the sky to see how you like it, for variety sake. Anyhow, good shot.
Take care!
Richard

Splendid shot Nino
I love beach shots, it always gives me a peaceful relaxed feeling and this shot is no exception.
Well done Nino
TFS

Hi Nino,
Yes, the branch is a bit disturbing but instead of cloning out I recommend another crop :) see workshop
cheers
ToM

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